Reviews for To Come Home
lightorange chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
I like the story, even though I feel sad about Naruto and Hinata :-(
Leafless chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
So heart-warming.
LilithiaRW chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Oh my God.
I wasn't planning on reviewing this one but... It was jut that good. That you could fit so much into just a oneshot... TT_TT this is how SasuSaku should end. Why is it not soooooo?!
jessi chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Great story!
SkeletoNQueeN06 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
aww.. sweet , sweet family.. hakhakhak
Lilac Queen chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Honey, could you get any better?

One of the best one-shots I have ever read!

It fits perfectly for both the protagonists, really.

You said that you're a realist, and this one-shot just implies it more effectively.

Excellent work, seetie. Keep it up!

love ya,

Imaginary Enemies chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
this is my favorite story as of right now! plus, i love the little fluff at the end. too cute x
moni-neechan chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
This is PERFECTION! Seriously...your choice of words is so absolutely beautifully figurative and awesome I was like...gaping at some words wondering how much effort it took to find them! :D

Also, I just love your little story and it's like you said in your A/ " managed to combine angst, drama, depression and fluff in under 3000 words." and, if I may say so, you managed quite well. :D
TheLavenderHippie chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
I think the fluffiness was just right :3 Though Kakashi and Naruto made me a little sad. But I guess it's all job on this, I think it turned out wonderful. Wouldn't mind reading a story like this, WINK WINK! ;D
DivineKitten chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Very sweet and realistic. Thanks for the story! Love it!
Shinoburedo chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Thank you so much for having Naruto still love Sakura nevertheless. I always thought it would be kind of hard for him to move on from that resilient love he had for Sakura to something more than the usual, happy-go-lucky friendship he had with Hinata. You made it seem more realistic. And your portrayal of Sakura and Sasuke's interactions (how Sakura was aware of everything he wanted before he voiced it) is so exquisite and very much like them. Well-done, well-written and enjoyable :)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
It was lovely. It seems the rest of Team 7 have bittersweet endings though.
4321rayray chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Awww, how cute! I kinda feel bad for Hinata and I hope things work out. (I doubt we'll ever know though...) It's already past midnight and I couldn't sleep until I had finished reading this story at least. Here I was, lounging in bed and as I check my email, I get a message saying an update. I was inwardly squealing, seeing as it's late at night, and I think I've read this story three times by now. It short and sweet and I don't mind reading it over and over again! Great job on this story!

Keep writing,

- 4321rayray