I absolutely love this story! It's amazing and wonderful to read!

when did Maura learn Jane's real last name? when she's going off on Garret about his behavior she calls Jane 'Rizzoli' instead of 'Johnson' as Jane's been telling everyone her last name is. Did I accidentally skim over where Maura found out or was that a typo?

Awesome thanks quite a few good laughs so far

This chapter is odd. I have loved everything so far... although, I do think your initiating their romance is taking far too long. But I continue to read because you are a wonderful writer and I think you have really built up their dynamic very well. I just think things should go faster as far as plot. Anyway this particular chapter is odd because you have Maura just walking up to Jane and immediately speaking to her at this party. I was hoping you'd have more tension between them here. And then to have her act so sporadically while intoxicated was weird. I actually enjoyed the part where she is crying and Jane comforts her outside, but the way I would have envisioned that would be to see Jane at the party and then have them not speak, Maura gets drunk, and then Jane takes her outside where Maura cries over her father saying, "Holidays are meant to be with the people you love." Which would have led to their reconciling. Or something along those lines.

Also as a quick addition, I also kinda think that Jane's assault on Maura should have been her kissing her. That seems more shocking and fitting to me. Also because that whole conversation was pretty much a lover's spat.

Overall though, I do enjoy this piece. I wish you honestly spent more time with Jane as Jake Wyatt. I find that character more fun to tell you the truth. I think Maura and Jane should be an equal story but it should be more centered around what Jake Wyatt does. You do a wonderful job of setting up the wild west though and you do a great job of explaining each of their characterizations.

Never know what to write in these review that appropriately portrays the enjoyment I get from reading a good story. You have quite a few wonderful stories. I know this is years after the story was written but... Great job, I loved the piece and premis. Going right to the sequel.

Really great story...loved done.

Finally...yaaay )

Wow...a heavy chapter...so much adrenaline...it was great.

Nice chapter...really liked it.

Awww...im starting to get that the last parts of the chapters are the best.
this one was awesome specially with mythology.

O..o...trouble begins.

The last parts were amazing...im impressed.
i love your story.

Awwww...thats heart breaking...im angry and i feel sorry for jane at the same time.

I just finished this story and I know without a doubt that it has been one of the best Rizzles stories that I have read. You managed to unite the era and the characters (while keeping their personalities intact) and create a very enjoyable fanfiction. Please keep writing more Rizzles!

I am greatly honoured to post the 3000th review to this story, it is one if not the best RI story I have read. I read it from start to finish and am eager to read the sequel which I will do so after posting this review. I love how you made it work even if the different time zone and worked in the other characters and parts of the show such as Hoyt, the part with Giovanni, etc. I also love how slow burn this was, really kept me itrigued and wanting to know how it came about. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed immensely.