What a wonderful story. I hated having to put it down to go to sleep, even when I had that pesky thing we call work! I'm. Headed for the sequel now!

I was wondering when he would make an appearance...Leave it to Maura to befriend this monster!

Liking this story very much so far...Your way with words was so great when describing Jane's uncomfortableness...I could just picture her getting all flustered,etc.
I think it would be fun to be friends with Jane!

Maura needs to get off the Jake Wyatt talk..she is going to give Jane away and she is so obsessed with finding out..Jane asked her not let on that she knows about JW but she just constantly brings it up..So far they have been alone but one of these times she is gonna spill the beans.
.One of the many things that I don't like about the character (Maura) is her constantly always trying to get Jane to tell all and she gets mad when she doesn't and/or just keeps pushing and pushing til Jane feels guilty and just tells all...but..when Maura wants to keep something secret that's an all together different story...she is boss, nosy but very pretty.

This is a rather interesting take on a new story..I love westerns so it should be fun! I only hope that at the end of part 2, you just don't suddenly just stop writing...
I am not a fan of cliffhangers..I like my stories to be completed with no loose ends!

Dauuym! gurrrrl XD lookin at d'ose melons ayy ;) love this chapter made me giggle like a idiot XD

ok this chapter was even worse (mecrying) oshit maaan i had to pause eachtime i read one sentence urh *sniffsniff* but at the end of the chapter lightened up a bit heh XD and i had to laugh ass lol
great they made up ! now go and kiss eachother dammit XD

omfg i, i cant breath! shit im crying so hard no srsly! fk
this story is amazing i cant describe it omg.
im only on 22/50 damn im pretty sure im going to cry again, just wanted to say i love this story and ur writing style..awesome.
i like how slow this is going thou i get real many feels cause of it, urhg i hope they make up soon, my shirt is all wet dammit author XD
well then to the next chapter m'yeah!

The best fanfiction I've ever read.

What's the sequel called?

Author, I took my time writing this review. I even did it in Word first and pasted here. I feel like it is the least I can do considering this gift of fiction that you gave to us. We have been battered around due to not having Jane and Maura as a real couple on the show, and so your story is nothing less than a salve for a Rizzles-lover's soul. I want to compliment your genius on how you paced this story. I know you mentioned you were concerned about that during one chapter. Well, my opinion is that you kept Jane and Maura moving toward each other slow enough to make it believable, but fast enough to keep us all interested and excited by their gradual increase in affection. The humor was excellent; the drama was compelling, but the romance was unrivaled by any other piece of fiction I have read so far about this pairing. Exceptional job.

Hahahaha the potter reference was absolutely brilliant, I laugh so hard haha

Oh well, what is one more review among thousands, huh? But.. I am starting to read this story of yours and it is very entertaining. The problem with these long fics is that so much is going on that you don't get to compliment the author on all of the small but brilliant moments they write. Your idea to introduce Bass was fantastic. Lots of very good, funny and meaningful things in here that only a real R&I fan would understand. Thanks.

Loved the story. Awesome writing. Can't wait to get started on the next one!

Just read whole story,my eyes are red and sore but it was totally worth it. Thank you... And now onto number 2