Shit just got real. I’m way too into this story. I swear all that’s missing is popcorn. Can’t wait to see how Jane reacts to Maura’s new acquaintance.

What a truly wonderful, utterly perfect story! I loved every word!

Wow, just wow.

Oh, you're good! I'm gonna have to go back and read a couple chapters before I go on. By the way Sweet Afton reminds me of Nickel Creek. Wonderful song. And why are so many wonderful songs tragic. One of your OCs was Ellen Smith, look up Poor Ellen Smith. Hopefully it will show up. Or maybe you already know it. I played bluegrass for years. Anyway, nice work.

I am so hooked! And I love the way you put some canon in there. Nice work, very nice.

Nice job with the horses. And the story.

I've put off reading this because I didn't really think it would be any good, and I grew upon a horse and westerns. Until I was 16, I spent every free minute on my horse. Anyway, I'm so glad to be wrong. I thought 'well I loved everything else I've read of yours so why not?' Now I'm hooked. Glad Jane's not a total B****. Well back to it and on my way to some Rizzles. Nice work and thank you sooo much for writing from someone who has no talent, but loves to read good fanfiction.

I've read this story a few times and I can't believe I've never seen this before. I'm from Long Island and we say we grew up "on" Long Island not "in". Lol

Thank you, for this gift.

the falling down and crossing her arms was hilarious, but "gunshot wound to the head vs heart" had me ROTFL

Lovely story, thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of you musings.

Wow! I have just read this for the first time and I am blown away. Great story on its own but to also link it in with the show story lines and characters was such a joyful experience. Off to read the second installment now!

Awesome awesome awesome story.

i remember reading this for the first time a few years back: finishing it, falling backwards and taking a deep breath, then reading it straight through from the beginning again to relive it all. I just fell completely in love with everything about it: your writing style, the characterisation, the plot, the entire setting, the history involved in every line which made me think of the gal pals who must have lived this for real ! and now, going on 6 years after it was completed, i suddenly remembered this inexplicably, and boy i am so glad i did, because experiencing your world all over again is such a pleasure. I'm heading over to the sequel now, but all of this is just a wholehearted thank you for everything you have and will create, for opening that brilliant mind of yours to the rest of us. This is undeniably one of those stories that stay with you, that you can keep going back to and find something new to marvel over. So thank you.

Sweet quote from "Queen Christina" Greta Garbo -