Reviews for The Immortal Changed
oreo20861 chapter 8 . 1/4
:( Wish there were more, but, it was a really good story. Great job!
littlebear62007 chapter 8 . 9/30/2014
Update
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2014
Dude. I hate you. Thanks for the story anyways
Matt chapter 8 . 8/27/2014
Peter never left Neverland you moron.
Monkey dragon chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
You could at LEAST have someone ADOPT the story!
Leena2695 chapter 8 . 6/11/2014
Well I can't say I'm not disappointed but thanks for at least letting is readers know that you're not going to continue this, even though that was fairly obvious anyway, good luck with that girl, hope things work out for you
RandomDude chapter 8 . 6/9/2014
"intellectualLY stimulating, habit of reading." If you're going to say that reading improves your intellect; at least try to read what you write in an author's note.
AncientTide chapter 6 . 6/6/2014
I love the twist!
AncientTide chapter 4 . 6/6/2014
Im going crazy!
Guest chapter 8 . 5/16/2014
Please continue
Matt chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
I liked this story up until you revealed that Percy's mom and good step-dad are dead. I hate stories like that.
AmeliaJane14 chapter 7 . 5/12/2014
More!
Dark Supremacy chapter 7 . 3/31/2014
Great story thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
what about the next chapter
ShiraChan-Desu chapter 7 . 12/7/2013
-Cries- Agh! This is so unfair! I really, really, REALLY want to read more!
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