Reviews for The Immortal Changed
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2015
You are continuing this story right? Please
the ultimate fanegirl332 chapter 8 . 11/7/2015
i would like to adopt this story from you it was really good and sounded like it was really going somewhere please pm me you response
oreo20861 chapter 8 . 1/4/2015
:( Wish there were more, but, it was a really good story. Great job!
littlebear62007 chapter 8 . 9/30/2014
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2014
Dude. I hate you. Thanks for the story anyways
Matt chapter 8 . 8/27/2014
Peter never left Neverland you moron.
Monkey dragon chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
You could at LEAST have someone ADOPT the story!
Leena2695 chapter 8 . 6/11/2014
Well I can't say I'm not disappointed but thanks for at least letting is readers know that you're not going to continue this, even though that was fairly obvious anyway, good luck with that girl, hope things work out for you
RandomDude chapter 8 . 6/9/2014
"intellectualLY stimulating, habit of reading." If you're going to say that reading improves your intellect; at least try to read what you write in an author's note.
S'Tidey chapter 6 . 6/6/2014
I love the twist!
S'Tidey chapter 4 . 6/6/2014
Im going crazy!
Guest chapter 8 . 5/16/2014
Please continue
Matt chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
I liked this story up until you revealed that Percy's mom and good step-dad are dead. I hate stories like that.
AmeliaJane14 chapter 7 . 5/12/2014
Dark Supremacy chapter 7 . 3/31/2014
Great story thank you for sharing.
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