Reviews for When I Return
Martin chapter 1 . 8/26
Wow. This was awesome! The story and the language used are so good. I can't believe you were only 13 when you wrote this. Keep up the good work!
natipanfichi chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
I ship it
Ella chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
I wish people would nake more of these. I love it. It was short but a lovely story.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Cute. So in this they are about the same size?
Mayu Sato chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
So sweet :)
I really enjoyed reading this, good job.
Frost chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
So sweet!
ASianSuccessor2012 chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
This is a beautiful story :) I love it! Great work! I've always loved Fievel Goes West and your story fits perfectly!
Abney-Newgate chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
This is beautiful! Such a wonderful story and a joy to read! In fact, this is one of my favorite couples, even though their species and many differences do set them apart, but ya know, love comes in all shapes and sizes! And you story has indeed proved that!

Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work. :)