|Reviews for The Blood's Desire|
| TendernessOfTheHeart chapter 41 . 10/19/2013
I love you!
The story is awesome :D
- A fellow phan
| shadowchsr chapter 40 . 1/4/2013
I just finished reading your story and it's going straight to my favorites. First off I want to say that I completely loved how you took elements from Dracula, Phantom, and what I saw as small elements from other influences here and there, moved everything to a modern setting and told a truly original version of Phantom of the Opera. I loved how you characterized everyone, also taking different elements from Phantom, bits of the novel, musical and Kay's book. I liked how that a sign of the Demon being in control was when Erik would talk about himself in the third person. I also like how that you made sure Christine was no shrinking violet. after all she is older and more mature than Webbers christine from the musical and you had her reflect that. I also like that you didn't Raoul bash. While not a huge fan of Raoul, I always saw him as someone who truly thought he was doing right, part due to the status he was born into, but also because he truly cared. And you had him truly reflect that in his character here as well.
I also enjoyed the rare snippets of Phantom lyrics that popped up as dialogue. I noted that most at the end. Though the outfit you had Erik dressed in at the final confrontation had me getting an image from a character in the Anime "Hellsing" whether that was you intent, or you were trying to make a more modern rendition of formal wear for the "red Death" he wore at the masqurade or you just wanted something flashy for the final battle. Either way, it was a striking image.
I look forward to reading the vingettes to see what happens after this story. I miss having that final scene of actually seeing and hearing Erik and Christine at the end.
I think my only nitpicky thing that I have to say is that I don't approve of Erik's choice of victims. Maybe it was a rage on his part to want to be able to seduce and scare women but once he got the interest of the police, or even from the beginning, it would have been much smarter for him to pray on the city's forgotten, the homeless, thieves, and criminals. the ones the cops may not really take an interest in right away and if he hid or disposed of the bodies he could have had much more time before the cops caught on. But that wouldn't have moved the plot. okay I'll leave you alone. I hope you continue to write and I look forward to more of you Phantom fanfiction. Take care
| Shadow of the Red Rose chapter 41 . 1/2/2013
That was a really awesome fanfic. I spent the whole day reading it. Oh god. To think of my homework...
I wish the epilogue had been a little more clear about how Erik and Christine lived. But overall I really enjoyed the story and I'm gonna go read some of you other works.
| Lina chapter 9 . 12/14/2012
Hi oh my god this story is amazing and I live the book Rebecca to its so also me and mysterious don't you just live gothic novels
| critic chapter 41 . 11/22/2012
so...i just spent the whole day reading this...all 41 chapters..and it was a great ride. keep writing! i'd love to see more ErikXChristine action though :D
| critic chapter 34 . 11/22/2012
okay christine is starting to sound really brainwashed. now she accepts his killing? i thought she wanted to help him learn to drink without murdering. and she likes it? what.
| critic chapter 21 . 11/22/2012
OMMGGGG 3 finally it happened :DDD but I wonder whats gonna happen when she finds out he's a vamp...
| critic chapter 9 . 11/22/2012
Erik seems too sweet in this story so far...i liked it when he was a little madder, angsty, and possessive. but still bravo for this story :)
| critic chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
i love this story!
| missmarisolmarie chapter 41 . 11/20/2012
I'm so glad I found this! Great writer, great story. xo
| SpiritRose3496 chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
I absolutely love this story! It has lots of plot twists and keeps me wondering what will happen next :) I liked the way Phantom was woven into this story so that it all worked. great job!
| PhantomsOpera13 chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
NO IT CANT BE OVER WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL
| PhantomFan01 chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
At least Christine didn't want Raoul to suffer...can't believe it's over :(
| angel34jolly chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
| Scribbles in the Dark chapter 41 . 11/15/2012
I was on the edge of my seat until the very end to find out what happened to Christine! I hope one of the vignettes includes Erik's and/or Christine's perspective on what happened after Nadir and Raoul left the house after Christine was shot.