|Reviews for Vulnerable|
| CDG7 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
beautiful, so sweet!
| littlequestie1237 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
i love it! XD its jst beautifully written, great and touching description of jerome's vulnerability throughout, and idk if i could put it better myself! Haha XD
| ForeverAvailable chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Cute 3 I wish they would just get together already! Oh and please read my Jara story: "Jara Season 2: Love Hurts, literally!"
| TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
I'm flowerofmemory! Heh, obviously from my username-yeah, thank you for doing this! I'm so excited to read!
I love how detail-oriented you are-it's great!
[she had to admit (if only to herself) that it felt nice to be trusted and depended on. ] I have a feeling in the show, she really does feel that way. D
[but this seemed stronger because she knew that Jerome never really shared his true self with anyone.] YES YES YES, totally right! I love this already!
["If you feel at all nervous, you can take my hand," she whispered, reaching for one of his. ] DYING HERE! But honestly-it's so realistic-I mean watch the show, Mara's always making some sort of naive mistake-HOW many times a week do we hear her say 'sorry' to Jerome? It's adorable!
Jerome took her hand...this is so adorable, I just have to mark it as a fave for how realistic it is!
I DEFINITELY think you should continue more Jara stories, even if they're only scenes! You have a knack for it!
And I locked myself out of my tumblr for academic reasons but if you want to follow me on Twitter, I'm flowerofmemory there as well. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
| Occhi Marroni Dorati chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I loved it! And I've seen that person on tumblr a lot o:
I just love Jara so much
Btw, Imagining Jerome running a hand through his hair and biting his lip is a major turn-on omg.
Jerome and Mara were in character so well and the story is so well written, especially for a first fanfic (unless you have written before) :3
| just kiss me slowly chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
That was great! A bit short, but this was your first story, right? (if I'm mistaken, I'm so sorry!) If you're going to continue that's awesome, but if not this is a perfectly good oneshot.