|Reviews for Tai Lung drabbles|
| such a manner chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
very adorable, i love it. i love the way you show us tai lung's battle between staying in this world, real word, or just dropping himself to endless nightmare. i love this sttrong, heavy emotions that are radiating from his thoughts. his pain and torment - you show it well. cut off sentences, cursing... simply: expression.
but the thing i am afraid of; you seem to like to ignore, do not pay proper attention to logical aspect of the story. i am afraid that your inner transformation of tai lung may look incredibly monstrous. and it would be bad, very bad. try to focus on the probability of the story, write more about his thoughts, not only those infected by rage and despair, but those saying what is in his mind, why he chose exactly this, his intentions, and so on, so on. do not damage, reduce such a wondrous character.
because we agree on that, tai lung is wonderful;)
| FFcrazy15 Not logged on chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Oh- oh... *Pulls the snow leopard into a hug*
| BetaReaderForHire chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
scary... But at least its a Tai Lung story... GO TAI LUNG!