Reviews for Love Boat
bcaponigro chapter 3 . 2/7/2015
Is Josh II the killer? please finish this great story.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2013
First Josh II, then the Caskett kiss. Earlier bathroom incident. All Caskett flavored. Loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I lik your writing. You are really good.
GT500RonSmith chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
The scene at the table before the a$$hole showed up was super funny! Of course, you had to name him Josh! The kisses were lovely! I am hoping Josh is the bad guy and that this next chapter gets Caskett to confess some love!
GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
The 'Always' exchange was really special. I want them so much to admit to each other that they are in love!

This one is fun!
the frenchie chapter 3 . 3/12/2013
Terrific! I loved the change of scenery, love that they are together on a boat, struggling to hide their love and desire for each other, trying hard to pretend...This fic was also full of good ideas, such as having Kate got seasick and I just couldn't stop reading (not that I ever do, when I start diving into one of your fics )

Anyway, awesome story, how about one which would take a plane...? :)
mary-brow chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Where can I find the continuation of this story? I'm on an iPod touch and it won't let me put that link in a browser and I want to continue reading!
galinette33 chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
Okay, I post my review there, because I will write in French, more easy for me to give details about how I loved this story, and I think Sandiane / Julie understands french.

So, Laura, forgive me, to sum up : I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story...!

J'aime quand vous écrivez à quatre mains.

Le début de cette histoire , rien que la première phrase :"Rick Castle watches her out on the dance floor and thinks, not for the first time, what a colossal mistake this was." est une invitation à lire la suite... Rien qu'avec une seule phrase, vous arrivez à capter le lecteur, à le retenir prisonnier de vos mots.

Puis le contraste entre l'environnement, l'extérieur, l'alcool, la fête, le bruit (même si la croisière est destinée aux couples en péril...) et leur mal-être intérieur. Ce même environnement qui contribue aussi à exacerber leur attirance...

Et vous nous embarquer, c'est le cas de le dire...

Tout est bien, le mal de mer, la piscine, le couple pénible, Castle se faisant draguer par le barman sans s'en apercevoir, les séances avec le psy, leur intimité dans la cabine, le coup de poing, le miroir et j'en passe... C'était parfois drôle, tout le temps magnétique quand il s'agit de décrire leur relation, du suspens aussi (j'avais tout le temps peur que Castle finisse dans l'océan !).

C'est eux, c'est bien eux.

Et c'est tellement bien écrit, leur sentiments, leurs pensées sont tellement justes... Toujours la bonne note, la bonne dose, celle qui vous scotche à votre lecture, à votre écran, respirant à peine, lisant avidement, vite vite la suite...

Et Sandiane, si tu es française comme j'ai cru le comprendre, chapeau, la manière dont tu t'exprimes en anglais est fascinante.

Voilà, voilà. Huit bons chapitres, pas un seul passage qui ne vaille la peine d'être lu, tout est bien. On en redemande !

Merci !
Mathiilde3 chapter 2 . 2/7/2012
Oh my freaking goodness, I feel like swearing and cursing and bagging my head in the wall and running around the house shouting hallelujah and dancing and this is too much joy and I cannot take it. My heart is actually beating rapidly and at one point there was a case of hyperventilating going on. What your writing does to me is not entirely normal. I have nothing but flail and praises for you. This is fantastic already and I am only two chapters in! I love how he thought he was dreaming and just went with the kiss and how they both reacted to it, Kate smiling in the shower and Castle jollying his way down to breakfast. Oh how I loved it. And breakfast with them being playful and sassy and body contact and teasing and then Josh II, whom I already love to hate. That was hilarious! And then more kissing and I melted in my seat. Can we have them kissing all the time? No really, this was really, really great and so wonderful to read and amazing and fantastic and astounding and beautiful and exquisite and just an infinitive list of positive adjectives. Fabulous work!

Tweetyj chapter 2 . 2/3/2012
I'm not much of a reviewer, especially not before the story's complete but I just wanted to tell ya that I really, really like where this is headed )

Looking forward to the next chapter(s)
tiff098765 chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
I'm a lovely little puddle of goo now.
changingoceantides chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
Just wanted to drop a line saying how much I enjoy your writing. This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. Keep it up!:)
Topsy chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
And a smile. Mm, there's a smile in that voice. He likes that. A lot. Likes her. Kate. – Awww!

Taking advantage of that, he curls his fingers at the nape of this PhantomKate, and tugs, bringing her in for a kiss. – LOLOLOL. Oh, Castle.

But that was the dream. Right? That wasn't real. Couldn't be. If he really had kissed her, she wouldn't be lying here rubbing her arm like everything's fine, a small smile tugging at her lips, her whole face lit up like she's- Happy? – Hee!

"Like Prince Charming and Sleeping Beauty, you know," he keeps going, his mouth running away from him even as his mind screams shut up shut up SHUT UP. "Sorry you had to stoop to that." – Hahaha.

She might have stayed like that for. . . awhile. She might have just stayed that way for awhile. Yeah, still smiling. – Too freakin’ cute.

She really tries hard not to listen. She is really not listening. Are they at this point already? Comfortable going to the bathroom in front of each other? – LOLOL!

She yelps as the water turns cold, the flush resounding in the small bathroom. She crowds away from the spray, shivering, goose bumps breaking out over her skin. "Castle!" - HAHAHAH.

Jeez. They're supposed to be having problems in their marriage, not solving them. – MEEP!

They make their way downstairs, saying hello to a slightly older couple that they met briefly the day before, and Castle is struck by how very different today is - what a bright contrast it offers to the somber misery of yesterday. – Aww!

Castle remembers at the last minute to grab Kate's hand, lace their fingers. She's his wife, after all, right? – Hee!

Oh god, he loves her. It thumps in his chest, the fierceness of it, the savage need, and he steers them towards the buffet, hoping that food will make for a worthy distraction. – Bawww!

The challenging light in her eyes, the pressed-lip smile: he knows exactly what she's about to do. And the second her arm darts forward, he's scooped up the bowl of strawberries and cradled it to his chest, out of her reach. – Haha. Nice.

"Really?" she purrs, and he focuses on her with some difficulty. It doesn't help - her eyes are shining with amusement, that soft glow of triumph and power all over her face, and she's absolutely- Irresistible. – Hehe!

Kate laughs - low and delightful and god, *so* sexy - and as her foot deserts him (oh, why?) comprehension slowly floods his brain. – Love this.

Well. Two can play at that game. – YEAH BOY!

One simple word, and everything is clear. They're on the same page and there's no need to worry. – Good stuff.

She pushes her tongue to her teeth to scrape her scalded taste buds, feels his hand clench around her knee - in warning or instinct, she can't tell. But really? Just her tongue? – Oh man, I love this. Am I going to have to quote this entire thing? HAHA.

"Oh, seriously, get a room," a man says with a laugh, plopping his tray down across from them. – HAHAHA.

The man shakes. "Josh." – OMG! LOL

"This is Kate. And yeah, you know how it is, the good days are good and the bad days are bad." She sucks in a breath and glances over at him, because that statement was just too true, too real, for it to not have some anchor in reality. – Oh man.

Josh II (whose resemblance to Josh I is certainly not doing anything to mitigate Castle's irritation) has been hitting on Kate - shamelessly hitting on Kate, might he add - for the last ten minutes, and nothing they can do or say seems to discourage him. - LOL.

Oh, wow. Doesn't this guy have any survival instinct? Castle almost feels sorry for him. You do *not* want to cross Beckett when she's using that voice. The deadly voice. – Bahahaa.

Before he's made sense of it, though, she's already kissing him. – HEEEEEEEEEEE!

He might not have seen it coming, but that doesn't mean he's not going to make the most of it. The slow heat between their bodies, the slide of her tongue across his lower lip, against his teeth, the soft hum of pleasure that only he can hear - he takes every little thing she offers, gives back, dizzy with the taste of Kate Beckett on his tongue. And when she lets go - when he lets her go - he feels the shiver run through her. – Yum!

"I'm sorry, Castle - I didn't know how else to get rid of him-" He silences her with his mouth, his fingers at her jaw, working her just as skillfully as she worked him - gentle lips and aggressive tongue, an edge of need and a good deal of tenderness. She looks stunned when he releases her. And he doesn't even care. "Don't ever apologize for that," he commands softly; and then he takes her hand again, and directs them both towards their therapy session. – AHHHHHHHHHHHH! AWESOMESAUCE.

More more more more! Soon, please!
Bella Paige chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or funfacts, songs that the chapter reminds me of. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy ;p

Shouldn't open his eyes then, not (no) matter how tempting

Baby, it’s not a dream.

*pinches a strawberry*

Castle it’s called a cover for a reason.

Rick’s a lawyer

Looking forward to this session
pkl chapter 2 . 2/2/2012
Oops, now I'm confused. It's posted twice?

Hmmm. Anyway I enjoy every single line!
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