Reviews for Patchy's Blog 4: This is not Gensokyo
The NHK Ambassador chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Fun stuff. Patchouli must be bored, bless her youkai soul!
7636kei chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Badly pulled Martin Sue? Check. Blatant lack of research ('beach on Gensokyo,' how the Great Hakurei Barrier works, mortal kombat rather than spellcard kombat (pun intended), resulting in a place definitely not Gensokyo)? Check. Bad flow of logic? Check. Patchouli Knowledge is in a killing spree, indeed. :p

IMHO, if you know how to pull it, perspective shift is fine. I used one myself (the perspective shift, however, was used only between dreams of two sleeping men and the reality - it was a sleepover scene).

A boat 25 inches long? Five bucks says it's less than half Pache's height. I shiver to think how small the OC youkai is; my best bet would be Kisume-sized, assuming the bucket isn't absurdly large.

YMMV, of course, but being "more foul-mouthed than Kirisame-san" doesn't tell a lot for me; I don't think she's the type that likes to spam swearwords.

Metagaming issues aside, I think Pache has found a lead on who wrote the fict she have reviewed: Stoner Stanley. :v
Future Nekomata chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Now all we need is for Patchy to read bad shipping fanfic involving her and Marisa and Marisa is with her when she reads it.
HeadServantJo chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
i love patchy's blog!
CAPTAIN MURASA chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
I agree with you completely on how ridiculous this story is and I found myself quite confused while reading it as well. Though I must point out that because Iku Nagae is an envoy of the Dragon Palace, which is at the bottom of the ocean, Gensokyo would have to have some connection to the sea. You also missed one major flaw in this story. That flaw being that it needs more Captain Murasa

~Minamitsu
Omoi Kioku chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
I really loved how you portray the way Patchouli criticizes the most idiotic.."writings"! xD It always puts a smile on my face and makes my day made! :) Please continue adding more to Patchy's Blog! v
Flandre Nightshade chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Oh god.

XD

This is back?

WOOT!

One of the funniest freaking things in Gensokyo!
Flandre Nightshade chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Oh god.

XD

This is back?

WOOT!

One of the funniest freaking things in Gensokyo!