|Reviews for Better Than Pie|
| xoxokristen chapter 47 . 8/29/2014
Great story! I really enjoyed reading this!
| bigvamsis chapter 47 . 7/15/2014
| Featherfreak chapter 47 . 7/13/2014
I can't believe it took me so long to find this story. You really need to promote it more, it's beautiful. Very entertaining and well written. When Emmett yelled out that he was pooping and it was big, I woke my sleeping husband laughing so hard. Thank you for sharing this with us, I will be recommending this one often.
| bronzed topaz chapter 47 . 7/7/2014
I loved this story. I really did. I loved Emmett and I loved how you didn't make their relationship slow moving and full of drama and angst. So sweet.
But, have a problem with 'before the story' outtakes being posted as the final chapter. I feel obligated to read it, but It's like I'm going back to the start, removing my good, satisfied mood leaving the story. That's not to say it's bad, but it could have seriously done without the Edward and Charlotte scene. Edward's past wasn't a part of the story, so we didn't really think about him being with other people, not that we thought it didn't happen, but it wasn't an issue I thought about. And then, to get to the end only to read about him sleeping with another women, even if it's before he meets Bella, his mom dies and he grows up, it's a buzz kill. I read the reviews and I know not a lot of people seemed to have a problem with this, so maybe I'm just oversensitive with issue's like this. It's one thing for me to know B or E have been with another person, but another to read about it directly happening. Do you know what I mean? (Just to say, I skipped over that scene)
Anyway, I really loved reading this story and I'm going to try to pretend I didn't read this outtake, just so I can leave on a high note saying YOU DID A REALLY EXCELLENT JOB WRITING THIS STORY. :)
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