Reviews for Better Than Pie
GreenEyedLove06 chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
Loved it
AH Darling chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
I love your Emmett, he reminds me so much of my cousin Mike who has Downs. He turned 61 this year, yay!

I am glad that Bella and Edward are starting to warm up to one another and want to act on their attraction. Good times ahead, I hope!

Thanks so much for the update and happy valentines day to you and your lovely beta.
puasluoma chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
Very nice!
honeyimhom chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
I hope they don't hire someone that will make a move on Edward. Or a male cook that makes a move on Bella. Oh, that would be interesting a male cook that made Edward jealous.

Very good chapter.
Jenn1214 chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
Emmett is to damn funny. I hope Edward is going to do something about what he herd Bella say in the car.
TwiSagaLover chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
awe! they are so cute! and omg i love emmette!
KristineM chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
Edward I think we've established that Bella is trustworthy! Great chapter! Thanks so much!
chatterbox33 chapter 2 . 2/9/2012
I love how they beat up on Edward and take care of Emmett. Its great to read a story thats so kind about someone with developmental delays.
chatterbox33 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Hahaha "can we keep her?ยก" i adore your Emmett and how kind Bella is to him.
Twilightsatellite chapter 4 . 2/9/2012
They sure have fun! :)
Nissa-Cullen chapter 4 . 2/9/2012
I like this story. It's cute and Emmett is even more lovable then cannon. I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop between all of them. How long until they fall in love? How hard will Edward fight it? Bella's already trying. I'm looking forward to reading more.
HereToRead84 chapter 4 . 2/9/2012
like this.
muzaklover chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
Great job.
MillieD chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
Loved it.
robfans chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
thanks
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