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![]() ![]() I knew this was familiar the moment I read the first line. I saw this on ArchiveOfOurOwn. And I added it on my bookmarks. I never did that, despite the millions of fanfics I've ever read. It is this good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() apparently holly isnt the only one who knows artemis fowl... ~moonshadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful one-shot! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! It is the most perfect Holly X Artemis fanfic I have read to date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! :) So perfect! Really what you said in the summary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was okay until the last six lines. Then it was amazing. We get used to the character development for characters like Artemis or Holly, but this one was made much better by the way it was written. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do love that last line. Very interesting rhythm to it. :) |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. You made me mushy. "But because she has watched Artemis through his years and through his adventures and nearly died with him, making snarky remarks at him all the while." Well, for one thing, there shouldn't be a "because" there... but may I just say that I was rolling on the floor? Comic relief is da bomb. I like how you started with the "outside" version and turned it around: "flawless" to "with flaws," and implied the A/H. Very good. ~~ILF |
![]() ![]() ![]() mto boa essa fic! |
![]() ![]() You got me with that last line. It's REALLY good and descriptive! I want you to write a chanteuse story. Because I ABSOLUTLY LOVE your writing style! |
![]() ![]() Sorry, I meant CHAPTERED story! And I really LOVED that last line! |
![]() ![]() You got me with that last line. It's REALLY good and descriptive! I want you to write a chanteuse story. Because I ABSOLUTLY LOVE your writing style! |