Reviews for Drift, A Ride Outtake
maarit chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
very nice, I was curious about the marriage...
Mlle Lizz chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
Oh my god, i love this story so much. Thank you. Liz
Lemon Charlotte chapter 2 . 3/5/2012
I'd forgotten that I'd not read this. I love these two :) You need to write more, js. Hxxx
TheBellaFanatic chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
HAHAHA I love when Bella teases Edward. It's so freaking adorable. You just can't stop the smirks from forming on your face while you read it. "Spoiled" absolutely loved it.

Edward's reaction to her new bike was cute too. Like a kid in a candy store or a boy with a new toy. These two just bring out the best of each other. Two different worlds melting into one. The old saying, "Opposites attract" truly comes into play with these two.

Once again another great chapter. Definitely will be looking forward to chapter 3.

B-Fan XOXO
TheBellaFanatic chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Playing catch up with my updates and look at what I found. SQUEEEE! Someone has been writing again. *does cartwheels*

You definitely have not lost your touch. In fact, I would say it is still perfect. I love the detailed descriptions of their "reunited" sex. *fans self profusely* You definitely know how to go straight to a woman's heart and *whispers* between the thighs. *smirks*

I think Edward is fooling himself if he thinks that this will be a temporary job situation. His father may end up liking the time off with less stress and actually retire permanently. Which might be better for Edward in the long run of things.

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the second chapter, so I'll just be hustling myself over there real quick like. Great chapter, keep up the excellent work.

B-Fan XOXO

(PS: Very interesting POV about the Burka at the beginning. Very thought provoking & educational. I like your way of thinking.)
feja chapter 2 . 2/26/2012
Amazing 3 What more, more, more and more :D
feja chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Ohmigod Ohmigod Ohmigod! LOL.

Anyways I love that I found this outtake. Ride is an all time favorite of mine and I can't get enough of these two!
glo4twilight chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
well kris i have always maintained that i just love your lemons or smut or whatever the fuck it is! your dirty talking edward knows no bounds and omgfg he has such a tight grip on my libido right now!lol! i am frickin beside myself with how much of a state i'm in after reading this! *pants and salivates* lol you are soooo mean. i'm so glad that edward is taking over the company as that will keep all the suspicions at bay. and i love that his and bellas spark hasn't dwindled at all but probably increased in intensity...hahaha! his recovery if he even has one is omfg...phenomenal. fucking lucky bella!lol!
WiltshireGlo chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
I love Ride Edward.. And Bella! So glad you're doing this, you've made me very happy!
pattie g chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
I am so excited. I just found out that you are writing a new story. I loved Ride and now I know I will love Drift. Can't wait tell you udate.
Luvtwismut chapter 2 . 2/24/2012
I loved that she surprised him witha bike of her own and took HIM for a ride! Love these two!
BeBrezzy chapter 2 . 2/24/2012
Im so glad you decided to fill in some of the blanks in the original! I loved Ride, seriously its in my top 10, and i missed the characters (and the lemons lol) so thanks for this little side story!
Rima2000 chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
So glad you are doing outtakes for Ride...I am so enjoying these. This story and characters are so well written...you should consider writing more stories about this Bella and Edward...because there is so much to work with there. I am sure all your readers would love to revisit these 2 characters. I know I would.

I love how they both challenge each other and that they are so sure of themselves and so passionate. The contrasts make for great banter and bring in humor and just enough mystery to keep us always guessing what Edward is up too. I love that he is so comfortable with who he is...and that Bella knows he is not going to change and wouldn't ask him too. She just asks him not to jeopardize her career and to respect her position. I think he enjoys the added challenge that her job brings to their relationship...it keeps him on his toes.

And she likes the audacious and dangerous side of Edward because it is unpredictable and exciting. They are just wonderful characters. Thanks for the great ride you take us on with RIDE!
Sunsetwing chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
So them, though. For her to make him wait so long for her answer :)
amsuth chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
So ridiculously excited to read this!
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