|Reviews for Pieces, pieces|
| CrypticRebel chapter 1 . 1/9
T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T Why must so little make me so sad! T.T T.T T.T T.T T.T
| Soluzek chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I found this via your companion art piece on DA - I'm not at all familiar with the characters, but I love this story, & your work went perfectly with it. Cheers
| mimic shalle chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Dave is too, I don't know... he's too, ah, whatever it is, he's too David-esque not to torture. He's just begging to be melancholic, I suppose, and it's 'ohsosoright' .~
(Technical) There's just one thing I'm going to nitpick at because I can't really help it and it just begs to be pointed at, it's the garden part. Dave remembering his mother bit. It's just that the interruption in describing Rush was too long and too divergent that it divides the reader's focus. Dave's memory of Rush or his waning one of his mom? Pick one of the two to declutter the sentence.
Well anyway, I hope you do well in your finals! And good luck on your animation project~!