|Reviews for Between Night & Day: Extended Version|
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 10 . 2/1/2013
| Freelance Fanfictioner chapter 10 . 4/3/2012
I personally can never imagine Goliath with anyone but Demona (and if I were to make up my own ending, I'd say Goliath somehow finds a way to get back together with her), but in any case I hereby give you a standing ovation for this awesome, well-written, highly entertaining story! It is obvious you invested a LOT of time and effort in it.
Just a technical note, though: the chapters are looooooong and extremely difficult to get through in one sitting, and if I stop in the middle, I forget where I was when I start reading again. So perhaps you might consider splitting this into more chapters?
| Xade chapter 10 . 4/2/2012
| James Birdsong chapter 9 . 3/28/2012
| James Birdsong chapter 8 . 3/20/2012
| James Birdsong chapter 7 . 3/10/2012
Of course these four chapters are good
| James Birdsong chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
Very cool three chapters