Trust, support, and faith...beyond the romance...love but not in love...life succinctly and so well verbalized...and only 24...amazing!

做得不错!

我喜欢你的故事真的！

Sehr schön gemacht !

I liked this.

All the characters acted very in-character. You summarized the relationships among the main characters accurately and clearly. I liked the way you described Alicia/Peter-nobody was vilified, everyone acted reasonably. Your perfect grammar and spelling was a rare treat. Thanks for this.

Do not end this! i need to hear the convo between alicia abd will! u cant end it! please update soon! love the story !

Can you just have at least one fic where Will and Alicia actually talk about their feelings? I mean great job, as always, but we viewers are having a kind of romantic angst overdose right now. I just need a happy little escapist fic, sigh.

LOVE this part: Of course I do, Peter. I will always love you. You are the father of my children and the only husband I have ever had. I will always love you. But I'm not in love with you anymore and I've never been foolish enough to believe that I'd be in love with you for the rest of my life and I was always okay with that. Marriage isn't just about romance, it's a partnership built on trust, support and faith. I'll always support you because of our kids but I don't trust you and I don't have faith in you changing. Not anymore. I love you but I don't want to be your partner anymore. Please, let's just do this right for Zach and Grace."

It's so . . . raw and the romantic in me doesn't want to think of love this way but it seems so realistic. So heartbreaking.

Will you write another chapter with Will's call?