Reviews for The Showers
FlamingForest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
My only suggestion is to take out the author's note in the middle the "(if you'll forgive the pun)" note. You get sucked into the story and then it's ruined by the note. Other than that, I can't find any complaint. Hot story. Definitely will be what I think about tonight. ;-)
FutureMrsSnape chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
VERY good story! One suggestion is to never put author's notes in the middle of the story. If you take that part out, about the pun, then it will flow much more smoothly. You get lost in the story and then an author's note pops up and you remember that it's just a story, so it ruins it a bit. But with that in there, bravo!
HermisLupim26 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
mui quente e linda
404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
That was great! Loved this fic :D
VividInfinity chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
why did he get into the ONE shower that was occupied?
nice detail
good fanfic
i hereby award you virtual cookies
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
that was amazing
TheSpazChik chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
That was hot. I'm gonna go take a cold shower now. Good job though:)
Moonraven81 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
all i can say is WOW
novo chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Like ur story, will there be more?
chyaraskiss chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Heartstopping action. Loved it! Wish there was more.
onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
hehe that was great
kimber chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
nice i love smut
Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
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