|Reviews for The 5th Alphabet of Fluff|
| Night Owl 33 chapter 25 . 7/6/2013
| wavesofred chapter 10 . 6/6/2012
HAHAHA this reminded me so much of our fandom how we're like "OMYGOD SHE HANDED HIM A PENCIL ALERT THE PRESSES!"
| wavesofred chapter 2 . 6/6/2012
| wavesofred chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
| vanrigsby chapter 24 . 4/15/2012
Well, my reviews seem to have gotten mixed up. I reviewed the next chapter with what I was going to write for this one. But anyways...
I'm not going to hate you for not finishing the alphabet. You did awesome, and it's up to you whether or not to continue. Your writing brought pleasure to my day and I'm glad you wrote as much as you did. Thank you.
| vanrigsby chapter 25 . 4/15/2012
Another cute little chapter! Adorable! Can't wait for the next one!
Ideas for X and Z... Hm... Well, X could always be Xylophone. You know, Jane just tries to have a bit of fun learning to play the xylophone, but it annoys Lisbon? Perhaps. Z could be Zest Like, lemon or orange zest. Maybe Jane/Lisbon could be cooking dinner for the other, and they have a petty little argument about whether or not to include zest? I don't know. Maybe not. Up to you. Other ideas could always be something simple like Zebra. I'm sure you could work something out of that if you're out of ideas :)
| AccountKiller254654354351 chapter 25 . 4/14/2012
hey, im not gonna hate on you for not finishing the alphabet, just it was a plesure reading it and im sad i wont get this challenge :P i compleatly understand how you feel, my parents dont know i even read fanfiction, let alone write for it, i dont even think they know it exsists and if they did find out i think i would just about die of embaressment because is so nice just to write without having to worry about making up characters, just use someone elses and write a story for once. I compleatly understand if you say no, but would you do me the honour of letting me finish your alphabet for you if you can't, i have a few half baked ideas for X, Y and Z that i was gonna share with you.
It was lovely talkig to you and dont worry im not some weirdo on the internet, i just a 15 year old girl living in england who knows exacaly how yo feel. It was fun whilst it lasted eh?
| Brown Eyes Parker chapter 25 . 4/14/2012
My dear, I'm glad you decided this. If you can't be yourself online or in RL, and can't mix both worlds you shouldn't do it.
Thans for the stories. We'll miss you.
| ShellGrad chapter 25 . 4/14/2012
Have you asked your writing partner to continue this series of AOF? It makes me really sad to see you leave. I do hope you'll return sometime. Until then, it's been really great reading your stories and I'll miss the updates :)
| Totorsg chapter 24 . 4/13/2012
the last two chapter were great :)
i loved it :)
| AccountKiller254654354351 chapter 24 . 4/13/2012
omg! i love it! soooo cute :D i love the bit at the end where lisbon chokes on her tea, you can actually imagine that happening :D. X could literally stand for X as in 3 kisesses XXX or chemical X like of the powerpuff girls... OMG THEY COULD HAVE A WHOLE CONVERSATION ABOUT THE POWERPUFF GIRLS! IF YOU DONT I WILL!
| vanrigsby chapter 23 . 4/12/2012
Well, this made me smile. My favourite parts would be 'I was thinking, that's where the one goes in that square, but I get the feeling we're talking about something else' and when Grace threw her pen at Cho. You have written a cute, funny little one-shot, I really loved it! Probably one of my most favourite chapters of this so far!
Oh, and you used my idea :P You're welcome :)
| Wldwmn chapter 24 . 4/12/2012
Heehee, Jane made it seem so much dirtier than it really was. This was also very cute; the image of the two of them playing in the snow was charming.
| Wldwmn chapter 23 . 4/12/2012
Omg, so adorable. I love matchmaker Van Pelt! And how cute was the thank-you speech at J&L's wedding? Great update! :)
| ShellGrad chapter 24 . 4/12/2012
Z - zebra because that white and black striped shirt Lisbon wore when the team was undercover and waiting for someone to pick up ransom money made her look kind of like a zebra