Reviews for AntiHyphen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice hope u conintue with the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() "With your other subject though, I have nothing more to say than BE CAREFUL! I've been working on my whole "judgmental issue" (as Lily calls it) thing, but the Zabini lady rings all kinds of alarm bells. I don't know about her son, but if you ever feel like he's trying to seduce you with the intent to kill you and take your fortune, don't be afraid to back out. It's not a problem if he's after Mell, except the whole killing thing, because she's the younger child. You're the heir. The money goes to you in the end. And you're all too young for that anyway, so what am I saying? Well, have a good school year." I LOVE YOU! XOXO, Serenity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to hear you have had difficulties, I hope they resolve in your favor. I enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for writing. W. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story the characters have more depth I like that Lily isn't a saint and has taut the twins more than just being totally nice as she is presented in the books. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is great. If you were to continue this, I'd be more than happy to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED. IT. No other words! Please UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a self-professed crack fic, this story is very well written and the characters all shine with personality save for the antisocial girl-who-lived, which, I suspect was intentional. Guardian of the Sacred Emerald Flames |
![]() ![]() ![]() Light-hearted, deliberately irreverent, and hugely enjoyable. I was snickering to myself for the last two-thirds. Guardian of the Sacred Emerald Flames |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very fun fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent update, thanks! I had to reread the whole story, since it's been so long, but it was worth it. Favorite bit: "Treacle tart and apple pie!" James added. "Along with some chocolate cake for Remus of course." "I may even share," Remus said mildly, "though that seems unlikely." "Then I won't make you any more cocoa," Mell threatened. "Then Camellia may have a slice," he corrected. The werewolf rolled his eyes at Sirius's answering chicken clucks. "It's an investment, not an act of cowardice," Remus countered. "Unlike what I could say of you on multiple occasions." "Like when mum threatened to tie him outside with the rock dolls if he didn't stop sneaking icing off our birthday cake," Mell offered. "Like when dad threatened to burn his collection of Witch Weekly magazines," Harry continued. Sirius looked at him oddly. "I don't have a collection of Witch Weekly magazines." "Then why did you react to that?" Harry asked. His godfather shrugged. "I get threatened so much that I stopped paying attention to what the threat actually was and just do what I was asked to." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahaha! Fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and nice job on the home life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Classic line: 'Her children were so spoiled. All three of them.' Very different characters you're developing in Harry and Mell. It's a nice and welcomed change |