Reviews for AntiHyphen |
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![]() ![]() They are trouble. Hogwarts is going to be an old collapsed ruin by the time the twins are through with the school, right? |
![]() ![]() This is good |
![]() ![]() A very nice fanfic! It is good to read about a Harry growing up with a sister and his parents still loving him, being in Slytherin and not being harassed by Dumbledore or the other students and the siblings not having super powers. The plot is very original and develops at a good pace and you humour makes it interesting. My only point of criticism is that the children seem a bit to mature for being in their first year at Hogwarts. You could solve that problem by letting the siblings being home-schooled for maybe 3 years and then attending Howarts. I hope you continue the excellent story one day. |
![]() ![]() Why is it called Antihyphen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that this has non favorite potters. Like I really really think if they are willing to die for the child they wouldn't have chosen a favorite. And tried their best to be equal to both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish the author would wake up and complete this story. The characters are interesting, an excellent variant of the 'wrong boy who lived'. It's nice to have competent parents, friendly siblings, etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent and interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun and lighthearted. The relationship between the siblings is adorable. I'm not sure I understood Harry's ambition in the mirror (Defense professor? Why would he need to become a master schemer for that?) Very enjoyable overall. |
![]() ![]() 2 is this abandoned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear, I'm sure Hermione might be secretly thrilled, but Camellia is- I feel- going to be far from impressed. Even if it is important. Anyway, regardless of everyone's reactions, or because of them, I can't wait for the next update! Please post again as soon as you are able to! No pressure, though. For something as wonderful as this, well, we can wait. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() a Potter's and Weasley's twins association should be great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this! The twins are amazing - I think Moon had a crush on Harry - and I like seeing these things. Keep Up The Good Work~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Except for Acacia, everyone is way too chill about Blaise's murderous mom. And Harry being lighthearted about her dying husbands is a good way to alienate people that might otherwise be useful. Also-from the beginning, it sounded like Harry was trying to start establishing social circles as part of his ambition (although if he's wanting to become Headmaster as seen in the Mirror of Erised, such manipulations aren't really that important...). However, the only people Harry interacts with are his sister, Hermione, Fred, George, Acacia, and Blaise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but feel that Dumbledore's worries aren't exactly unjustified. |