Reviews for AntiHyphen
Maleivius chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Good chapter, Snape makes me mad. I wonder how mad Harry is going to be when Quirell is found to have let the troll in, I rather pity the man, Dumbles suspected Camellia as a vindictive person...I don't know what the hell that makes Harry. Love the story, can't wait for the next update.
RobC chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Interesting story and characterizations.
Strumwulf chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Excellent chapter. I like how you are developing Camellia. Harry & Hermoine are excellent. The small details of how this world is different are great. How several of the characters are the same as cannon, really highlight the differences. Looking forward to more.
isk2837 chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
Another good chapter. Hope Dumbledore doesn't get it into his head to try something. Liked the Harry/Hermione/Camellia friendship scene, though I'm not sure what to make of Camellia's possessive display at the end. Interesting that Camellia and Harry are connected in some way - very curious as to what role that will play later in the story.
Wolfric chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
I am enjoying your story. Thanks for writing. W.
Ace Kamishiro chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
lqtm. it's all i have to say. keep it up, it's good, AND different. not many of those out there. most stick to one vain, or the other. so this is actually interesting. well anyway, i anxiously await a new update, but for now, it's 2 am and i think sleep is in order. this is Lord Vyper saying, Peace out.
Wedge12 chapter 3 . 2/13/2012
A great start. It's so nice to read a Slytherin Harry who actually understands what cunning means.

Camellia is a nice take on the whole Harry-Sibling-who-lived thing. Very different.

Keep up the good work.
TheHard chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
The story is great! I'm really curious, I want to know where are you taking this...
Teucrian chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
I've been having a blast reading, especially when Harry's up. Great work!
Mark Solo chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
This story has my intrest. New and rather refreshing, so I think I'll keep an eye on it from now on. Keep writting. Quit good so far.
MariusDarkwolf chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
This has definite potential. Hope it goes Harry/Hermione if you take it that far
Nydirac chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
Oh my god! fantastic!
pazed chapter 3 . 2/11/2012
Okay I like it but I'm reviewing because of 'They Raised Them Left, Not Right'.

I LOVE it. Is it a quote? - if so I don't know it, but it has that feel.

The story is interesting so far and the four Potters' personalities well-presented and amusing. I'm intrigued by the hints about Lily's real character & the melted thumb anecdote was very neat. Harry's Slytherin-ness is awesome.

I'd love to see the same balance of the four continue but will understand if you go more for the Hogwarts scene.

Whatever comes, I look forward to more and thank you for writing. Cheers ...p
aalens chapter 3 . 2/11/2012
I shall definitely keep on reading this fic, it is very entertaining. Many thanks.

BTW, please forgive an on-the-fly Brit pick, but here:Lavender Brown was eager to share what she'd heard from various upperclassmen. Senior pupils in British schools are not called 'upperclassmen', that is a purely American term.
aalens chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
I am delighted that Harry loves animals - however his character develops I will be able to forgive him much for that. LOL

Why is Harry so very short? Being the shortest in his class means he is even shorter than all the girls. In canon the reason he is small seems to be his less than perfect upbringing by the obnoxious Dursleys, here however he has loving parents who I imagine would have fed him well.

Thanks for the warning about Snape bashing. I find that very hard to deal with - however at least you have warned about it. It seems that most fanfic writers warn about bashing almost everyone else but do not warn about Snape bashing. So many thanks for that. At least I'll be prepared for it. LOL
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