Reviews for On the Outside
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Wow o.o

I like this story. It's so different and so unexpected.

I like it.

Ari's name means "lion"? Huh. Fitting.

I like the Ziva/Malachi conversation.

And now it just occurred to me that Eli could get in trouble for having a half-Palestinian son. Hmm :(

Good story.

Sophie
Plurimisverbis chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
He's a good character Malachi & I like the set up you created here. The boundaries, lack of trust tension.
LtTanyaBoone chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I like it ) Ari signing not with his name but with a scribble makes sense to me and was a nice touch. Also, Malachi asking if he's "sharing" her OMG
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Malachi likes them young!

Good story.

Interesting that Ziva thought Ari needed to be hidden.
rubiesandrain chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This is so cute! I love Ziva and Ari's sibling relationship! Update soon! :)