|Reviews for On the Outside|
| Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
I like this story. It's so different and so unexpected.
I like it.
Ari's name means "lion"? Huh. Fitting.
I like the Ziva/Malachi conversation.
And now it just occurred to me that Eli could get in trouble for having a half-Palestinian son. Hmm :(
| Plurimisverbis chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
He's a good character Malachi & I like the set up you created here. The boundaries, lack of trust tension.
| LtTanyaBoone chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I like it ) Ari signing not with his name but with a scribble makes sense to me and was a nice touch. Also, Malachi asking if he's "sharing" her OMG
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Malachi likes them young!
Interesting that Ziva thought Ari needed to be hidden.
| pirate-princess1 chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This is so cute! I love Ziva and Ari's sibling relationship! Update soon! :)