|Reviews for When|
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/3/2013
You lied you skank
| jayrambles chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
Aww! That was so cute and fluffy! :)
| jayrambles chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
Oh! This was interesting! I can't wait to read about Mollie's meeting with Oliver! :)
| jayrambles chapter 4 . 2/22/2012
SPECTACULAR! Nuff said.
| jayrambles chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
| TheUnforgiven135 chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
Ah young love
Future Mr. And Mrs. Potter you got there:0
| Cabin3Demigod chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
I understand that it was purposely short and you did very well, but I'd have liked a sentence or two in which it explained why their meeting was so...important to the story. You did really well though. And the beginning, I believe you said, 'this is their story' and it sounded very cliche, but if thats your thing, eh. Im all good with it!
On that note, I would like to refer you to a creative roleplaying site called Rocky Mountain International (www. rmimagic .com). From this story it looks like you'd fit in wonderfully with the other creative writers there, and I think they need a staff member right now too. You should definitely take a look. :)
And PM me if you have any questions. I can delightedly tell you that my character's name is Nicols Biggs, and that it has so far been a great experience for me!
| TheUnforgiven135 chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
Cough *Mollie Potter*