|Reviews for Zarokal the Demigod|
| Fenrisulven13 chapter 7 . 10/31/2014
It is alive.
Great update I had thought you had quit this story.
There are a couple of possible spellings misstakes but only minor.
Otherwise great update, I liked the way the prophecy keeps talking to our heroes,
So Belgeral is also imortal or next to it?
Could you maybe describe the capital of Sendariva I believe it was Vo Wacune?
Anyway update again ASAP.
| AlpacaOverlord chapter 7 . 10/30/2014
OMG you're back!
Anyways, great stuff here. I love how afraid of females poor Belgeral is. Zarokal is much cooler than my cousins. That ending has me looking forward to more. Soon, please!
| MillietheKitty27 chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
Oh dear. Zarokal would be the best cousin EVER.
| Liana chapter 6 . 10/29/2014
| Liana chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I like the way you portray the horse's thoughts.
| Fenrisulven13 chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
Still feeling sorry for both Polgara and Zarokal.
Though Zarokal is likely NOT the first who looses his temper with tonedran arrogance and will most likely NOT be the last!
So Sendariva eh?
At this point in time they should still be strong wacit-arendian blood and with rivans it will be a mixed race between rivan alorn and mostly wacit arendian kingdom then?
And I LOVE the way Belgeral decided to rebuild Vo Wacune as his capital(that must really bite the asturins in the ass).
Great story I loved it!
| Fenrisulven13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I feel sorry for Zarokal, his entire existence is little more than a mockery to him as Polgara was Toraks slave when he was concieved!
GREAT story I'll be reading on!
| Maximus Artilius chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
Keep at it my friend, for the moment you are the only person keeping this page on the site, I salute you