|Reviews for Sucked In|
| Cretha Loesing chapter 26 . 4/15/2012
Olivia's getting over-protective!
Or she's savign Leia for Han.
*smirks then frowns.*
At this point, Han is such a jerk...
...at the same time Leia seems a little stubborn and 'donkey-like', if you will.
| Star wars girl chapter 26 . 4/10/2012
I loved the part when Olivia was bossing the rebel around it was preaty funny can't Wat till next chapter
Ohh also how do u sign up for this website I would lov to write stories to. I always read star wars stories on my iPhone but I hav no idea how to login on this website
| Pirate-Spy-Demigod-Wizard chapter 26 . 4/8/2012
Obi-Wan's going to fight Ana- i mean Vader! Ohhh i just know it! That or he went with Luke, Nicky, and everyone else... but i still bet on Vader... Great chapter you copycat ( ;) ) and update soon!
:D happy easter!
| xxxRavensClawxxx chapter 26 . 4/8/2012
i loved the whole flirting scene! please use my idea for ben's death on the exploding death star!
| MysticRyter chapter 26 . 4/8/2012
Aw man. I don't get to vote!
Anyway, I'm glad I could help. It's one author to another, am I right?
| EmeraldEyedJedi chapter 26 . 4/8/2012
Great two chapters! I liked the twist, and glad you got some ideas! :) Coming along nicely. Keep up the great work girl! ;)
| xxxRavensClawxxx chapter 25 . 4/7/2012
that review about ben dying on the death star was mine but i forgot to put in my name. i thought that in the dark cave on dagobah, kari could have a vision of her evilly killing the other girls! :)
| MysticRyter chapter 25 . 4/6/2012
Okay, here's an idea. It depends on how much you want this to go off course from the movie, but you could have them split up. Again. Kari's lightsaber is held in the control room a couple floors up. They HAVE to get it, because
A) its a LIGHTSABER
B) its a weapon, and they'll need every asset they can get.
C) Han sticks with his blaster pistol, and gives Nicky the blaster he got from the stormtrooper.
D) When they run into stormtroopers, they find out the weak spot in their armor, which is the joints (elbows, knees, etc)
E) They storm the control room, which unfortunately alerts the other stormtroopers but Darth Vader is waiting.
F)Obi-Wan Kenobi is waiting by the Millinium Falcon.
G)Kari gets the guts the distract Vader, and she survives by the skin of her teeth. She finds she has the strength to Force push Vader, which gives everyone a chance to escape.
See if you can take it from there.
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/6/2012
biggs and luke and haven are all buddies and then ben kenobi fights to keep vader on the death star, but vader gets away and ben dies in the explosion. epic and tragic, and kari and luke both learn from yoda!
| BlueblazeHeart chapter 25 . 4/6/2012
Yay! Ben is still alive.
| Storyteller222 chapter 25 . 4/5/2012
We can talk if you want
| xxxRavensClawxxx chapter 24 . 4/5/2012
update soon plz!
| MysticRyter chapter 24 . 4/1/2012
That speech gave me the wa fuzzies. No idea why.
| Killer237 chapter 8 . 4/1/2012
I was not exspecting that. I thought Olivia was hiding on Corentsont not on the Death you mind if I could make a story simler the olny diferent's is that they are going to be 3 of them, they will be boy, some of the planets will be diferent, and it will be in episode 2. Thats all I can think of at the mommet.
Yo have inspered me.
| Killer237 chapter 7 . 4/1/2012
I really like it espoly the water moisture part I wounder wander what it's like to have a job like that.
I wounder how it's really done