Reviews for Once Upon a Time
Ciradel the ChronicleWriter chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
LOL X)
onlyone42 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
ROFLing SO HARD! Marry me. Hell no! xD i love it ,slight crack but still true to character. Favs!
hyllia14 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
... Wow. Just wow. How...

... Congrats, you're the first person to ACTUALLY MAKE ME BLUSH. O_O
Fuyukichi chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Oh. My. God.
I laughed so hard while reading your writing ! XD I'm note sure I'll be able to sleep right now XD
Yuri in a dress...I'm sure he is really cute *-* But Adecor in a dress...Never please XD The picture is really fun XD
Judith & Rita are really devils, right...Poor Karol XD

And the end...This end...! I love it !

"They lived happily ever after and had many children. No, forget that last part. They lived happily ever after and had no children, but it did not mean they did not try many times..."
This part was funny too, I mean...I can just imagine the scene...*perverts are perverts D: *
And the pig...Poor pig o_o

Anyway, thank you very much for this writing ! XD
A Tale Of Brothers chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
...g adoré. Cette version de cendrillon vient de détrôner ttes les autres xD la dernière partie m'a fait mourrir de rire, car Flynn serait vraiment capable de vouloir essayer de faire voler des porcs xD tant de fluff et d'humour dns une seule fic, c trop x3
Kaleiya chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Fallait que j'y laisse une review à cette fic... C'était obligé ! XD

T'as du bien t'éclater à écrire ça. Et pour la fin, Flynn qui prend Yuri au mot, c'était génial ! Par contre, j'espère pour Yuri qu'il n'a pas abusé des sucreries parce que c'est un coup à prendre des rondeurs ça. Quoiqu'avec Flynn, le "régime" ne peut qu'être efficace.

Et c'est sûr, Judith doit aimer le yaoi pour tous les auteurs de ce site. C'est à chaque fois elle qui intervient pour leur faire réaliser qu'ils sont idiots !

En tout cas, merci pour m'avoir fait rire. x)
Celice Chalphy chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Oh non XD J'en pouvais plus de rire! Sincèrement, c'est la meilleure adaptation de Cendrillon que j'ai jamais lue! Leblanc et les Tweedles... Judith et Rita... Et même le sort de Karol et de Repede, tout était parfait XD
Et bien sûr, Yuri et Flynn était sublimes dans les rôles principaux.
C'était très bien écrit, il y avait beaucoup d'humour, j'ai juste relevé une erreur de frappe: "Leblanc left him with chores do to", c'est "to do" si je ne m'abuse ;)

La conclusion était tout simplement géniale! J'ai adoré cette fic', je la fave direct!
PS: Je suis moi même en train de faire un one shot sur Vesperia, si ça t'intéresse!
Kiyoumi chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Flynn... Y U SO CUTE? And Yuri was brilliant at the end. xD
chiharu-tanaka chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
best. cinderella. story. ever.

i like how all the characters just fit so nicely. keep up the good work! ill be waiting for the college au
Poop957 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
I enjoyed this story alot! Especially the last bit where they didn't have alot of children but tried really hard. I was laughing and smiling all the time I was reading!
Vyrian D chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Gawd...I was LMAO-ing! Flynn said he was going to catch a pig! That was priceless! Is it just me or are you having a Yuri-in-woman-dress fetish? Not that I don't understand...he's just so beautiful *swoon*

The Tweedles are doing their job nicely as a Yuri's slaves (I laughed so hard, really) but I can't imagine Leblanc married with Yuri's mom. Although it's for the sake of the story...

Anyway, good job, as usual (and you don't have to reply this one. We're having so many replies, it gets really confusing LOL)
Standby1234 chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Damn, Yuri was a boss, a pretty lady, and a wife. Judith and Rita are too awesome for words and poor Karol. I swear my inner fangirl was screaming to come out. So fluffy, so cute. It was funny too. Loved this fic so much.

I wonder how many times they tried though...
bmsnakia361991 chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
I love your stories! HAHA! This one was great! You really have a talent at comedies. :D I love the thought of Yuri in a dress. And the whole Cinderella/Yuri thing was awesome. Yuri makes one hell of a Cinderella lol _
Riello09 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
God, I laughed so hard when I read the last part! It looks like a bad ending when you say "[...] and had no children" and yes, they tried but...XDDDD...hmm...Did they really intend to have children or just to have...? v

It was really funny! Well, I don't know if it's me but the characters are all acting ridiculously D (like the Disney's characters?)

Thank you for sharing this, you did a great work! Well done! ;)
Kaen Neko chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
This was hilarious and adorable. I loved it!