Reviews for Promise
Besweet chapter 11 . 7/31/2015
This chapter was hot! Hitomi and Hayate is my favourite pairing. Good job on your story, Its rare to find these two as the main chars in a story, really cool that you focused on them. I really enjoyed reading this:)
12mabold chapter 12 . 4/7/2014
shaianwillems chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
Oh my god! This chapter was so intense and emotional. I very much liked the progress of the story and the detailed interactions.
You wrote Hayate and Hitomi fairly well, and the chemistry they have together, made me all the more interested to keep on reading.
There are minor typos here and there, but it didn't ruin the experience though.
I give this a 8 out of 10 (Yay! My first review. )
hawaiianbabe927 chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
I love this story! You've done such a great job so far, can't wait to read the rest!
Patriot-112 chapter 12 . 10/25/2012
Awesome! Did you write a sequel to this?
ZalelTribal chapter 12 . 6/23/2012 cute, sad, fluff, and HOT! All in 12 chapters! U need to make a sequel! Please!
DragonNinja23 chapter 12 . 6/10/2012
Wpw, what an amazing story, I wish I had the ability to not only incroporate the title into the story, but center it and give it a greater effect. This was a very great story and thank you for referencing me. Hope to see a Ryu x Kasumi story soon also.
The Dragon's Kunoichi chapter 12 . 6/10/2012
I'm saddened that this over, but overall it was a great story. I can't wait to read future DOA stories from you. Well done.
DragonNinja23 chapter 10 . 6/8/2012
Interesting, Alpha Wolf knowing Hitomi's father and all. Really enjoyed this story, hope that you will write more when DOA 5 comes out.
DragonNinja23 chapter 9 . 6/2/2012
Another great chapter, now I'm curious what Hitomi's father could have possibly done to Alpha Wolf
Kage69 chapter 4 . 5/8/2012
oooh, nice cliffhanger there...

kind of reminds me of the old live-action batman show with your comments at the
Kage69 chapter 2 . 5/7/2012
great first 2 chapters. I like how you put a reconciliation between Ayane and Kasumi, I do the same, but I actually go through their reconciliation. Looking foreward to more.

I dont comment on every chapter unless something really catches me... otherwise it would be like good chapter, another good chapter, etc... thats not really a
The Dragon's Kunoichi chapter 8 . 5/2/2012
You've got me at the edge of my seat. Well done.
DragonNinja23 chapter 8 . 5/1/2012
Another awesome chapter gamma and delta must have had some super human strength in order to keep up with hayate, although now I really wonder whats gonna happen. another good cliffhanger
The Dragon's Kunoichi chapter 7 . 4/19/2012
I wonder what will happen next. Once again keep up the good work.
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