|Reviews for Dream|
| ayuzachan chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
ohohohoho! I like it :D Shouta I really like him, poor Kippei someone else is in Yusuyu's hearth!
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I enjoyed this :) Your writing is solid, though the italicised parts tend to tell rather than show (for example, Yuzuyu's insistence that she's 'strong, okay?'. Perhaps it would be better storytelling to show her being strong?) This also seemed a wee bit rushed, with a small portion of writing covering a lot of ground that could be examined in greater detail. Still, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing x
| Summer Blooms chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
That was cute! :3 Kippei's reaction is perfect and he's engaged to Kokoro! :D
| XxblackwingsxX chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Ah I wish it was longer. -.-
Ah well, don't mind me. I'm a sucker for long and detailed fics. Hahaha!
Anyway, good job on this. You just reminded me of how much this series made me goo-ey. xD
Write more! :)
| digidestined4eva chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
It's cute! I like it! :D I like your writing style and though this could be a little longer, I think you did a great job!The characters are all good and IC too 3
The only thing I can comment on is the paragraphs... the description you use is simple and easy to understand but you might want to expand on it a bit? and you tend to go into a lot of short sentences and dialogue! O: Though it's fine the way it is, I do like it, but I'm just suggesting something xD
Remember, you're awesome 3