Reviews for Control
cullen sandra chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
i thought, why cant bella be with edward, and wait a minute, bellas dad doesnt own a camping store!

Lightbulb moment, omg its MIKE! wow that was so good, well done. all the way till the end i thought it was bella.
orangeapeal chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
A tasty treat indeed. Well done!
galaxy69uk chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Before I came to review I thought I'd read others to see how many didnt realise it was Mike till the end, I totally read it as Bella till right at the end I had an "OMG" moment and re read it, very cleverly done!

I got to admit I am giggling away at the ones that are reviewing about B & E LOL

I've enjoys everything you've written so far.
MsLiss chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
All i could think about was wtf is Japser doing being friends with Jessica? Oh i didnt pick that one - a first i've ever read for sure!

thank you

i love the biology project so just checking you out! **wink, wink**
thelittlegerman chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
that was hot. i kind of wonder about the backstory here... care to elaborate? i could definitely imagine this to be a multi chapter story.
Kickinl8tr chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Great one and juicy lemon and lusty emotions. I'm reading biology project as well thank you for writing.
superxxxwoman chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
This is amazing! I want more than just a one shot! Oh pretty please with a cherry on top can we have a little bit more? xxx
HollBeth chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Well, it was certainly hot and lusty...and I got quite the shock at the end.

Not the shock you might think I had - the fact that this was listed as "Edward" and not a pairing automatically made me give up on it being Bella. However, I pictured Jasper the whole time. Seems he's the "go-to" guy to be paired with Edward. Poor old Mike always gets left out, so good on you for pulling a fast one! I'd have never in a million years suspected Mike! You were crafty enough that until I heard about the camping STORE, I could see ways you were trying to still make it seem like it could be Bella. But...anyway. It was crafty. ;)
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Hmmm'

not what I expected, but interesting

R
cutealy chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Great story...enjoyed very much...u little minx!xxx keep writing
pennycocktail chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
As usual, another great story.
kellybear3 chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Loved it !

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PurpleBrina17 chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Well Well, are we the dirty girl LOL
Never-Easy-Live chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I like this new twist on the dynamics of the couple, I can't wait to here more about how this started and how it'll end! I look forward to the next chapter.
bella0609 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Wow! Enjoyed it is not the word I was looking for . . . I thought it was fantastic!
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