|Reviews for Just Imagine|
| EmilyChelidon chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
Holy smoke! Don is a fast runner. A 10 minute 2 mile...wish mine was!
Love Charlie's thoughts on that double edged sword, and then writing out his equations on a random shop window! (maybe he should have hopped back on his float and used Einstein's chalkboard!) I love how he just pulls all these numbers and probability percentages out of thin air, it's always best when the genius brain comes into action. Especially whilst dressed as Einstein! Classic.
You've really done your research, right down to the specific building characteristics (and I really love the image of teenage Don breaking into a bank via a jacaranda tree!). Everything is so accurate, believeable and well-described and that makes this story work so well, even for someone who has only seen the first 3 seasons and lives on the other side of the planet (ie me).
Hooray! Colby is a hero! Thank goodness Charlie didn't get shot, you had me freaking out at the end of chapter 3. It's so cute how Don and Charlie are talking at the end about it doesn't matter if they don't work together any more, they'll still be close. Is that from the final episode? And yes, Socrates has groupies :D whooo!
Thanks for this, fun, entertaining, well-written and full of the best aspects of the Eppes brothers. Yay :D
| EmilyChelidon chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Grabbed my attention right from the first paragraph - always a good start!
Charlie reacts perfectly to being interviewed on TV. I can just imagine his shyness at first and then warming up to his subject before baffling the reporter with numbers! And how cute is it that he rode on a child prodigy float. Another great picture!
Wow, this whole parade business sounds massive! I guess we don't have it in quite the same way here in NZ ;) I have to go to track practice now; so I'll read the rest later on and review again at the end. Looking forward to it! :D
| LadyBeryl chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
*sigh* I loved/love this show. So sad it went off the air. Very entertaining read. Thanks for keeping it going!
| ym4yum1 chapter 4 . 5/21/2012
Loved that your brought Megan 'back'! No matter what, they trust each other to do the right thing!
Don and Robin, connected i"I have a job to do and I can't do it if I'm worried about you. Please, just go home."/i
Charlie as Einstein! Colby as a hero! And Don saving the day!
Perfect line i"If Don asked him, though, he'd never refuse."/i
Well done! xxoo
| Writer With Sprite chapter 4 . 3/9/2012
Wonderfully written. I have not had much time for fanfiction this quarter at school and have missed some great ones. Very well done.
| Rinne chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
Now that will let me review...
Great ending. Really loved this. You've packed a lot into this story. I adore your description.
"Did I just see your brother on television, dressed as Einstein no less, get run over by a clown in a ridiculous vehicle?"
Don managed to stop the burst of laughter that threatened to erupt and instead looked directly at his younger brother and spoke into the phone. "Oh, cameras caught that, huh? National coverage? Millions of viewers?"
Hee hee hee heee.
| nessy22 chapter 4 . 2/12/2012
Yeah, you definitely know how to play with your readers. Gosh, this ride in the police car was so nerve-racking. Not knowing what happend to Charlie. But in an instant the fear changed first in disbelieve and then in alleviation. But when the end is good, all is good, isn't it?
This was a hell of a trip, you took us to. Thank you for that. It was a great pleasure to read this story. Hope to read another one of yours in the future again.
| nessy22 chapter 3 . 2/12/2012
So, I'm back from my trip. How I was longing to read the end of this story.
I know, that I'm repeating myself, when I say that your style is so real. I just dive into your story and immediately fuse with it.
Don's run was breathtaking in a real sense. It was a miracle that I wasn't panting. Or in the bank's hallway, when Don felt the adrenalin rushing throuhg his veins, biting my lips, I felt like him. But the top was, as Don heard his brothers name. I had to stop reading for a moment. Blinking two times while taking the courage to continue, I started for the last bit. I thought: It can't be! Only to find out that it was exactly the way how I suspected it before. Einstein was lying there!
My goodness, you know really how to build up the tension! Fortunately I don't have to wait for the next chapter "grin".
See you in an instant then.
| Sharon chapter 4 . 2/11/2012
The combination of action, worry, and teasing made this an immensely satisfying final chapter. Great job on this story!
| Ryhn chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
AMAZING STORY ! Thanks for the posting , I really love this story and I hope we can read another one from you : )
| Wenwalke chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
Good to see another story from you. This one was perfect. Lots of action and angst. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. Wendy
| Cissyaliza chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
Thanks for this very good fic.
| notsing chapter 4 . 2/8/2012
Oh, how sweet! Loved this story and our brothers reconnecting. Charlie getting ran over by a car full of clowns was too funny. Poor Don, he never gets the glory, huh? Instead, Colby plays hero in front of the cameras! Thanks for this fun story.
| baseballfan44 chapter 4 . 2/7/2012
Fabulous, as usual. I laughed hard when Alan was on the phone and it was discovered that Charlie got run over by a clown car, dressed as Einstein, on national TV. Nice touch.
Anyway, thanks for sharing this with us! It was fantastic from start to finish. I look forward to another one from you, hopefully soon, right? Take care.
| 1st endeavor chapter 4 . 2/7/2012
I truly enjoyed this story but I have one complaint-it was over too quickly.
It was great seeing Don, Charlie and all the gang working together once again and I loved Alan calling to ask if he had just seen Charlie hit by a car full of clowns? That was perfect.
You put a lot of research into this story and it showed. Thanks for taking the time to write it and for sharing it with us.