thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Good chapter I'm looking forward to the next one

Can’t wait for the next chapter love the story so far.

This guy has written a different fanfic whose whole premise is Shirou getting NTRd by various guys btw. Have fun reading this knowing that, lmao.

Man, it's been over a decade since I watched this but I forgot how unhinged the girls in older anime were.

It lives! I forgot most of the story so I had to reread everything. It was a great read.

Well, well, I just asked about her whereabouts in my last review and as saying goes 'speak of the devil and he shall appear'. Of course, she couldn't be further than a devil... black wavy hair, a gentle face with gentler eyes and a propensity for fainting... I don't need to mention her name for all fans will immediately recognize her. And I'm glad she'd finally made her appearance in the story. I wonder that role she'll play in the plot, like, will she and Naru still be involved in Shirou/Keitaro's Toudai promise?

Speaking of roles, Kanako's has changed greatly from canon. Where originally she had wanted to be closer to the Urashima family (by marrying Keitaro and managing Hinata Inn with him), now she wanted to distance herself from them. In a way, it's refreshing to see her not obsessing so much over her brother like in canon.

Motoko got a glimpse of Rider's real nature, with a good siding of lewdness involved as well. This will only add to her curiosity about Shirou and I wonder how she'll approach that in the future. Hope you update it soon!

“A certain amount of vigorous stabbing” indeed~ Wonder if anyone else will find out…

Great

I have put off readying this for a long time and I’m very happy that I picked it back up. Thank you and update soon.

Imma be real, poly stories dont bug me, open relationships do (i have my own baggage in that regard, so i understand some people are okay with it, im not) had it been a guy that was a mainstay and not just sleeping around it wouldn't bug. But the biggest reason is how toxic you are about people not agreeing with your choices. I cant trust you'll write a story in good faith if your knee jerk is to say those who dislike an aspect of your story are basically idiots.

Perhaps this is an amazing story, but in the fives seconds it took for me to read som reviews and find the AN in question you have left a TERRIBLE first impression.

It's good to see you back. While i don't fully agree with your character interpretations, I enjoy your story far more. Thanks for the updates and return to your petsonal marvel.

Great Chapter