I bet rin have sex with a woman cause there is no other man with a boner of a sword

Hmm, I'll try not to get riled up and go on a rant like last time I left a review but you basically did gaslight a good portion of your readers man..

Where did the accusation of sexism come from? Sleeping around is completely out of character for these four people regardless of gender. Shirou having a one night stand is as OOC as Rin doing it. There is no double standard for me even if it does exist in today's society.

It even goes against the characters you've established yourself in this story. Shirou even told Rin that he agreed to the poly - relationship because all three of them were very important to him. And Haruka tells Rin that a woman only agrees to such if she loves the guy too much to give him up. And Rin was the one who suggested this relationship in the first place. So this just makes her out to be some wanton woman who is super in love with Shirou but also sleeps around when he's not there. That is ridiculously OOC man. Same goes for Shirou and his one night stands. I just don't see him having casual sex without a meaningful relationship.

So what this amounts to is the author bulldozing over all character development just to - I guess prove a point or something?

Shouldn't they have enough self control not to need one night stands when they are away from each other? It just ruins the basic premise of them all being in love with each other.

You do you man; just don't expect others to like what is essentially ruining this story for a large portion of your readers.

I was initially mad, but I'm just disappointed now. No idea why good authors do this, first Third Fang with his DxD story and now Neoalfa with this. Both with similar issues, and both authors gaslight their readers when they don't agree with them.

let me guess, Shirou projected the Lucksman, er, Huntsman to make that shot

great chapter as always. sorry people are being assholes. I personally think you have been writing these characters very well. I shall look forward to your next chapter.

I thinl people forgot that Shirou and Rin relationship don't work that way.

Its wasn't Rin is a member of of Shirou harem. Its was the opposite way. Hell Rin is bi so maybe that a girl for all wr know

'Scuse me, I'd like to take you up on that Discord server for advanced chapters. Please and thank you.

Wait, what? There was a scene like that? Rin sleeping with someone, I mean. People are bitching about it? Okay, then those people are the morons for coming up with NTR immediatelly. Shows what they truly are on the inside if the first thing they thought of is NTR. I mean, I immediatelly thought you meant Luvia or Saber. I mean, I can imagine Rin and Luvia doing their usual banter, missing Shirou and do the dirty. Or Saber and Rin just overall missing Shirou and doing the dirty.

Kyoko's life ended via an arm-sized arrow shot by Shirou, and what an end to a self-absorbed woman like her.

The moment she decided to lay a hand on Ilya is the day she already signed her death warrant, and she thought her status as the 'heiress' of the Clan makes her untouchable... well, that arrow proved her wrong.

And damn, you have a Discord? Can I join?

Anyways, excellent chapter.

I'm glad to read another chapter of this wonderful story, and don't worry about me, I like how you portrayed the characters, and if I didn't I would just stop reading

I dont know how they even accuse you of something like ntr? Like how? Are they that brain dead and naive?
Apparently they dont know what an open relationship clearly is then...anyhoo
Thank you for this wonderful chapter and good riddence with that disgusting woman

Eh, don't really care if there is ntr or no only if it has something to do with the plot then go for it if it doesn't then it's unneeded details.
What I wanna see though is how Ilya is dealing with other Magus being for all intents and purpose now unable to use her craft.

To be honest i just think they are just sex friends

*sigh* just ignore the NTR complaint. Considering how the internet is these days it's probally someone Projecting their own problems after they NTR'd themselves.

Personally, I am a huge lover of NTR, and from my perspective, I could care less what relationship Shirou has with his haram or its dynamics.

I come for the ruthless Shirou flexing his magical powers over normies without exposing his magic. Overall, this chapter was a thing of beauty and I throroughly enjoyed reading it.

And technically speaking, vanilla is the true ntr since many of the people who bitch about NTR are wussies who are too afraid to even speak to women, let alone court them.
A cuck gets off on watching someone screw his wife while imagining screwing her himself. A person watching/fapping to vanilla hentai or the like is no different.

Anyways, great job once more and I look forward to the next chapter!

Awe man, I thought that shirou rider rin and Sakura had a polyamorous thing going on between them all. That’s totally cool that you didn’t though. Open relationships don’t sit well with me though. No offense at all to people who live that lifestyle though, y’all cool. Feels like cheating to me, but it ain’t my relationship and my opinion ain’t worth all that much. Anyways, fun story, but I will be taking your advice and dropping the story.