|Reviews for Promises of a Wandering Hero|
| PotassiumBanana chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
To be honest i just think they are just sex friends
| Reishin Amara chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
*sigh* just ignore the NTR complaint. Considering how the internet is these days it's probally someone Projecting their own problems after they NTR'd themselves.
| IHev9Sun chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Personally, I am a huge lover of NTR, and from my perspective, I could care less what relationship Shirou has with his haram or its dynamics.
I come for the ruthless Shirou flexing his magical powers over normies without exposing his magic. Overall, this chapter was a thing of beauty and I throroughly enjoyed reading it.
And technically speaking, vanilla is the true ntr since many of the people who bitch about NTR are wussies who are too afraid to even speak to women, let alone court them.
A cuck gets off on watching someone screw his wife while imagining screwing her himself. A person watching/fapping to vanilla hentai or the like is no different.
Anyways, great job once more and I look forward to the next chapter!
| Wabbayack22 chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Awe man, I thought that shirou rider rin and Sakura had a polyamorous thing going on between them all. That’s totally cool that you didn’t though. Open relationships don’t sit well with me though. No offense at all to people who live that lifestyle though, y’all cool. Feels like cheating to me, but it ain’t my relationship and my opinion ain’t worth all that much. Anyways, fun story, but I will be taking your advice and dropping the story.
| 0D chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Don't care about this story enough to care about the "relationship status" of the characters. An "open relationship" is not a relationship though, just pathethic people lying to themselves and others.
That being said, authors getting all high and mighty with their readers is not something I'm willing to waste my time on, as I couldn't care less about your personal views, so I'm no longer going to bother even skimming.
Wish you all the best with your writing, though.
| a2123330035 chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
here is the thing, ok you told us that they were in a relationship, not because of the choice of the girls but because shiro did not want to get too close to anyone, that is to say they are not in a formal relationship because they have not been able to convince shiro, translation they love shiro
but now you come to tell me that you are in an open relationship and that is why the girls sleep with other people
ok friend I'll tell you a little thing, this is NTR, don't get me wrong I have nothing against NTR, unless it's in the context of the letter V
but continuing with my point, from what you wrote you made it almost clear that the girls are only in an open relationship because they couldn't convince him otherwise, that is to say they don't want to be in an open relationship, they legitimately want to be Shiro's partner, now explain to me how a girl as in love with shiro as rin sleeps with another person regardless of the sex of that person
now with this explained, can you understand why you bothered people?, hell friend, there is a reason why open relationships always end in problems, there will always be a part of that open relationship that cares for the other part and tries to be at least a little faithful
also their open relationship is not as open as you think, just think about it, shiro only sleeps with girls who know each other and approve of each other, what do you think would happen if I don't know one day shiro decides he wants to sleep with a girl he met in a bar, do you think that girls take it easy in that situation?, seriously friend, you didn't build an open relationship, you built a harem where you have to be approved by the others to enter and where shiro can only be intimate with who they are they decide, but they can be intimate with others, I don't know, that would seem very NTR and toxic to me
| Dimensionador chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Cuando dijeron relación abierta honestamente lo primero que pensé es que Rider se divertía mucho con sakura todas las noches XD
| Gojosin chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Honestly, their relationship and what they got up to was never the big point of this story for me, so I'm sticking around to see where it goes because I absolutely love the story so far and the development that you've done with the characters.
| Shahzeb chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
thanks for the warning i guess i am gonna drop off here
but no thanks to the over the top gaslighting everyone who doesn't agree with you ruining the characterization of shirou and the girls through your cheap ideas about sexism and open relationships.
what exactly is the purpose of these scenes except make the characters completely off from their canon personalities honestly i hate ppl who bitch about realism in a fictional anime story.
Dont complain about sexism while writing a fanfic for Fate/Type moon universe go to RWBY lol
Anyways good luck its your story do whatever you want but remember its a derivative fanwork so the fans of the original can and will criticize you.
| KrisB-71854 chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Honestly, I'd need to re-read this fic from the start to even recall even mentions of the romance pairings.
Shirou came with Rin, Sakura, and Rider. Illya is his highly protective sister as well. At first, I figured that Shirou was merely going to be doing a brief vacation at the Hinata House. Maybe get talked into doing the handyman thing.
Of course, he does things Emiya style. EMIYA would approve. Then again he might also have just blown the entire room up in one shot.
I could easily see all these girls having crushes on Shirou. Normally, they'd just bounce off his denseness. Doesn't matter if he is in an open relationship. It takes some special effort to get through his thickness.
Also, he has his own standards. He'd also never date any one that his other girls disapproved of. He'd really take their character assessments to heart. That's just who he is. He isn't the type to do one night stands.
O.k. I could see him getting pulled into a one night stand after an adventure or saving some girl. That might feel too much like taking advantage of a girl for him though.
At this age, Shirou usually has rather thick emotional walls. It's only those pre selected females that are within his social circle. They've sort of been preapproved by each other and all that.
Oddly, on relationship angles, I always thought Rider and Sakura were more of a thing. Sakura has issues with sex, but makes an exception for Rider and Shirou.
I was skimming the comments. I was amused about those that didn't like the idea of Rider sleeping around. Let's face it any servant still hanging about could easily score a one night stand with no issues.
It's forming actual relationships with others that'd be complicated for them. I could easily see a servant not wanting the hassle of explaining crap to a modern muggle or worse a magus. Better stick to those one night stands with muggles. They are the safest options.
I can see Rin being more into the open part of the relationship. It's mainly because she knows Shirou. He'd eventually do the wandering hero thing. He wouldn't be happy tied to her bed. Well, long term anyway. I could easily see her having dibs when he is in the area, but if she's been hanging out at the clock tower all this time? It's time for her look for local lovers.
Oddly, I'm curious about what husband she might look for. If she merely wanted to be knocked up for the future of the family, Shirou would do. As a magus, she might want to select the best magical circuits bloodline that she could bed.
I don't really care who Shirou's other girls are dating or involved with. Well, Rider maybe and that's because she's had a lot of screen time locally.
Let's be honest. This fic is more about how the locals react to Shirou and their brief seeing into the impossible. Shirou doesn't give a shit about the Urashima family business. They could have easily bought him off with a minor allowance and not thinking about him anymore. Well, that was before the bitch that got her self killed off.
Now Illya will insist he take over the Urashima family or even better yet have her assign auditors to it.
I can't wait for Shirou to explain it to the old guy that killing the bitch was the only means he had of protecting the rest of the family from Illya. As long as, you are under his protection, she won't utterly crush everything about the family and ensure the memory of it is even forgotten or cursed.
They have no idea that was him being polite and only taking out the least amount of trash as the family could afford if it still wanted to survive in any form.
The old guy was wrong. Granny wasn't using this as a test. She was more likely noping out. She'll be even more stunned than anyone else that Shirou utterly controls the family when she gets back.
Shirou could end up as the family boogie man. Don't cross him or his. Just don't.
| patiphat1998 chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Rin thighs are around my head last night.
| bluefish1945 chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Well update Neoalfa, well update inded
| Eating Upside Down chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
So my 2 cents- this story is advertised as Shirou/multi. I feel like you targeted a select audience with those words. Now you have some somewhat irrelevant character interactions that would trigger a response from that crowd. And now you are upset that they are mad.
You, my friend, are a gaslighting author. Let me clarify by saying: an open long distance relationship is not a relationship. Relationships come with unique and privilege access to a person, and sex is regarded as the most intimate physical access one can have. Normal nomenclature of the word relationship doesn’t accept Ron’s particular circumstances.
Now as to why people are mad. Jada Smith is famous for having an open relationship with her husband Will Smith, and being the only one who uses those privileges openly. This doesn’t make her less of a mother or a bad person, but it is abnormal, and makes her husband less of a man. Part of being a man is taking care of your woman or SO. Outsourcing that intimate special privilege/right is not acceptable. Will and Jada might as well be close coparents with benefits. Not a married couple.
Is there a double standard? Yes. This might be complex for you but men and women are equal but not the same. I’d cheer for my son/dad to be in porn, but I’d die a little if my daughter or mother did the same. Men and women are physically and mentally wired differently. Women prefer steamy romance novels while guys like porn. This means sex has different implications for women than it does men. (See Robert and Cersei GoT.)
I think if you want to write Rin sleeping around, and her not being a sexually committed relationship that’s fine. But I’m going to give you push back on any notion that she’s in a relationship with Shirou beyond close friends. Moving on, any guy that’s cool with someone fucking their girl is cuck, plain and simple. And yes, you’ve made Shirou lame and pathetic if he’s in a relationship with Rin because then he’s a cuck.
For me, I read this story like Rin is a ex-wife. So I’m cool with it all. People aren’t mad about Rin not hanging off Shirou’s dick, just the fact that he’s cool with her getting pounded by anyone.
Additionally the fate series is about the story of a magically powerful woman submitting to her master’s wishes as his servant and fighting other servants. Sure Rin might be more masculine then Shirou- but concept revolves around his relationships with the girls. So it’s always been about Shirous dick.
What fucking crowd did you think you were catering to?
| R3born chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Wait... Dedicating yourself to someone you're in a relationship with is old-fashioned? Are you telling me people are constantly fucking around while they're in a relationship? What has the world come to...
| Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 29 . 7/16/2022
Rin, Sakura, and Rider as real people and not just sex objects?
Wait that's illegal.
Jokes aside, no worries from me. While I could never fathom an open relationship, I could never fathom it from either side. Neither the woman nor the man should seek other partners once they dedicate themselves to someone. I am old-fashioned like that.
Anyway, great chapter, thanks! Kyoko died like the bitch she was, a dog's death. Can't wait to see what happens next!