|Reviews for Promises of a Wandering Hero|
| naufalrakha0104 chapter 29 . 2/24
Wah this chapter is hardcore...nice
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/24
Comment below. Rider sleeping around does not fit her personality, where did you even learn that, from Doujins? Or some fanfic?
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/21
Rider sleeping around fits her personality.
Rin, however, doesn't.
Not because she's an accessory to shirou but just cause that's not who she is.
I wouldn't even have commented on this but the author did decide to put that note at the end of the chapter for some reason.
Honestly I'm more offended by making seta a huge asshole who fucks his students for the sake of drama.
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/18
This is...messed up. On the earlier chapters you have Rider and Rin saying how important Shirou is to them and how they wouldn’t want anyone than him, but then you went and said that they have been going around sleeping with anybody. This isn’t giving them personality, you just made them into shallow biches whose body was for everyone to partake in while they keep spouting lies about how Shirou is the most important man in their life. This is fcked up. Shirou already has low self esteem, he would probably drown in depression and be cold hearted cynical bastrd if he found out about it. Author, you really messed up. No, your thinking is messed up. You have been greatly influenced by modern feminism. Go hit the gym and not just stay in your mom’s basement
| Lugal Kug-ga chapter 29 . 1/8
I'll rather just read the chapters here as it goes, rather than reading in advance and growing a hate for it.
Though regarding the issue with their sex life... yah let's just say we all have different morals and values.
I'm more on the loyal type of relationship in a story even if it's polygyny, though can't really fault author's on rationalising things and making plots based too much on reality. Though it helps in giving insight on things that may stem in that relationship structure.
Though I hope I won't become too fed up with this fic before or after I reach chapter 34. Cause I still like it for now.
| Rooks chapter 29 . 12/25/2022
Yes, but all the girls in Shirou's harem love him and would never betray him, except for Rin, because she is a tower professional. Without Shirou, you will not mess with anyone, and also, the love and camaraderie made during the Holy Grail War would not be broken. , previous comment, you are a fool
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/15/2022
Goodness, everyone who’s alright with this is frikkn cuck, you all supported this cuck of an author as if you are alright with your girl sleeping with other man. Oh, you’re probably alright with that, because that type of girls have their own personality and preference which is a cuck like you all seem to like. If that doesn’t bother you then go tell your girl to find a man to fck with and send me some videos with you beating your meat while watching it, after all you’re fine with that right? It doesn’t bother you right?
| AnonymousAuthor3 chapter 29 . 12/14/2022
Me sitting here being confused because it mentions chapter thirty four, but not at all bothered otherwise. Just because MC has harem doesn’t mean other people can’t have their own preferences and escapades. Anywaysss… wonderful story as always, and I hope that you’ll continue to make it as long as you enjoy it. Have a wonderful day!
| UnholyDiver chapter 29 . 12/6/2022
Jesus, these reviews are a shitshow. No wonder you never update if THIS is what you’re coming back to…
| Rodenmar chapter 29 . 12/5/2022
Damn. Most of the commenters here need to touch more grass.
| MOOOOOP chapter 8 . 11/26/2022
Absolutely brilliant. Please dispel any concerns on whether you're portraying the Hinata girls as bitches. You have done a marvelous job thus far in treating the characters as actual characters and not just 2D cutouts.
| Pixie Duck chapter 29 . 11/24/2022
I don't know why everyone is surprised with NTR
This trash author is the same trash who writes The Fall. A garbage story about NTR'ing Shirou post UBW with some random trash who are properly his self insert stealing Rin and Saber.
The author is a fucking piece of shit who has a hate boner for Shirou. He only use him in his stories to get views.
The author is the same trash who held his stories hostage on Patreon too, so he's all around garbage human being
His excuse in the AN to justify NTR are pathetic just unfollow and unfavourite this asshole ans don't give him your money, he doesn't deserve it
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/22/2022
stop putting sexism in everything, all of shirou's harem loves him and they all just get along they are like sisters and share their lover, while shirou loves and protects them
| Stay night chapter 29 . 11/18/2022
the harem is good as long as no one is forced, it shows that you really don't know the cast of the anime, rin-sakura-rider-illya are completely loyal to shirou and vice versa, rin loves shirou would not do that to him and in case we don't know she cares about the tower more than lovers (except with shirou because she loves him) and sakura is the kind and kind housewife with shirou who will protect him and share with rider, who is quite elegant and loving, being in a harem can having her love with shirou, while also protecting sakura not to mention that he is quite fierce
| emmanjacaba chapter 29 . 11/11/2022
look at that cuck bitch stop updating