Lmao open relationships for Rin and Rider are wrong and its not even about sexism. It's just ooc. They both have little care for snu snu to the point where Rin has no care about any type of relationships and is ready to marry random mage with good circuits for her family, while Rider actively suppressed her feelings for Shiro due to Sakura. Lol Rin has either no lover or is single even during events of Adventures of El Melloi II and instead is still crushing over Shiro. Making them have seggs with other men undermines their love for him which came to be only because he survived 5th HGW. You know an event where he quite literally fought a fucking Heracles and Gilgamesh. Hell statement that "only women who's madly in love is ready to share her lover" makes no sense when the situation is fair for both sides. The main reason why this is bad however is that its a dick move towards Shiro. He already has "little" problems with self value. Open relationships will just make him feel like his worth is equal to that of a random dude from clock tower or even worse "toyboy". Actually no, he will feel even worse since he had to beat the greatest heroes of the world to get there. And also this type of relationships is ooc for Shiro too. You know mc that nearly picked a fight with Cu Chulain because he flirted a little with Rin. Lmao him having relationships with rando makes little sense too, even with the knowledge that Archer is Japanese James Bond.

Ah also this feels awful to readers as well who came to read a harem story due to the tag. Stuff like this should be warned about in the first chapter. Alas everything can be overlooked if it's fun, but my favorite mc getting cucked is not so ggs I guess

I’m throwing my own cents on this originally I was going to try to make a discord account but I thought I shouldn’t bother, so might as well do it here. In each of the 3 routes of fate/stat night Shirou ends with one of the 3 girls with the exception of UBW good ending in which he end ups with Rin and Saber. Those relationships were a strong bond they form with each other that can’t be easily share with others unknown. It’s OOC for Rin or Rider to even having other relationships outside of Shirou because their the type to remain loyal also their not that sexually active except in extreme circumstances requiring magic transfer or when their in love. I honestly rather Shirou just sticks with ones he’s the closest with instead increasing the harem for no reason. This isn’t about sexism if the reverse happen I would just as dislike the same like many mentioned in the comment section, an open relationship doesn’t work and it’s incredibly awkward and unrealistic and out of character for the people involve, especially for Rin and Sakura. Honestly author you clearly need a refresher on the characters personality and I get it’s fanfic and all but at least respect the characterization on each individual character your using. Again to reiterate I rather this story just stick with Shirou, Rider, Sakura and Rin in the end with no adds on to it and the others girls interest in Shirou are just tease but doesn’t go anywhere, hell even in Love Hina canon it didn’t end in a harem ending but just a single paring some maybe try to strike a balance and retrain some stuff.

Anyway this just my opinion if you want to change it or not it’s up to you. At this point I’ll probably drop it because of the direction is going and probably because you don’t get people reason for dislike. Have good day and good luck

Harems are between the main character and their love interests. The MC builds up a relationship with multiple people throughout the story. You claim it's sexism but 'Next Life as a Villainess',a reverse harem, is super popular among viewers. Rin and Rider with little appearances are nowhere near main characters in this story and to suddenly tell us they're having sex with people other than the main character feels wrong.

Polygamy between the Rin/Rider/Sakura/Shirou would've been fine, even if Shirou wasn't there but sleeping around is just going to feel like cheating no matter how you word it. their bond and love is special, forged by the grail war and the fact that shirou won his heart only consolidated it, privileges are also earned and if you don't understand that you're stupid, it's you who doesn't understand the characters, you seem typical aliade lloron and you make me feel sorry

polygamy works, open relationships are not stupid and accept it, the girls would be happy as long as they are treated well and not forced, however it is a fact that men and women are not the same, which is good

I don't see someone like Mokoto being able to be an equal to Shirou due to all he has faced and his spirit origin is the sword. He gains the skill on how to use the swords he analyzed

IMO it's not the problem of your vision of what NTR / Open Relationship are, but rather how you execute such situations in your stories. A warning would be appreciated in the description of the story, you did it for Shirou, so why wouldn't you do the same for others characters so people know beforehand?

Personally I love another story of yours (with Caster), and it was really good for up until you executed that gross sexual encounter during / after their official date. Like bruh it was so out of place.. And seeing you talking here about something realistic (overwhelming majority of open relationships realistically don't work out at all by a myriad of reasons, just a side note), or some double standards.. You do realize the fandom Shirou comes from is a male-fantasy eroge game?) So, I don't see anything unnatural why some people mad at you, no matter how sexist or disgusting you find it

Besides, Rin and Shirou seem like a close friends, I haven't noticed any commitment from the both of them apart from that sexual scene. They are just friends with benefits, how it's an open relationship? And regarding Rider... dude, you literally stated that distance between Shirou and Fuyuki is about 2 hours of commute, and Rider is Rider, so she can get to him in no time, just by a power of a lore, you know?) You don't need to invent the wheel so you can enforce your "realistic" beliefs on your readers.

Privileges, double-standards, deep-rooted sexism, same rights as men... What in the f am I reading now?) Dude, we know what real world is, thank you very much, and I think you deserve a kudos for voicing it, but dude.. Wrong fandom, wrong platform..

Peace

Btw, I fucking understood why the author written the ntr now, because he fucking loves it. I saw that story, "The Fall" written by Ichasenninwhatever you have favorited. I have gotten to know a lot of authors in my life, interacted and read their stories, but you sir? You're one of the top twenty of authors that makes me sick

I fucking agree with the guest that reviewed this on 9-29. I had really liked this story until the author fucks it up by having his weird fetish, which is totally NTR, added into it. So for the newcomers that stumbles into this story, be warned, this story will have ntr in the future.

Love the assassination Love all the dialog Can't wait for the next chapter

"This is a story with people who have reactions and do things that are grounded in realistic-ish motivations."

Dude, if so your definition of people with reaction and realistic motivation is by having the MC's girls fck other dudes, then you have weird and disgusting taste. Have you read "In Flight" by gabrielle's blessing? Or "demon King's hero"? And even better, have you read "from fake dreams"? That is a real story with people having realistic ambitions and reaction without having NTR, not this trash of a story. Seriously, the author should put ntr warning and not Shirou/Multi because that will bring harem lovers and ntr haters like myself.

Stop justifying your weird fetish you cckolds. You want your girl getting banged by other dudes, fine, you do you. What? Are you beating your meat watching your girl getting pound by your highschool bully or some old ugly bstards? Hahaha

"This is a story with people who have reactions and do things that are grounded in realistic-ish motivations."

Dude, if so your definition of people with reaction and realistic motivation is by having the MC's girls fck other dudes, then you have weird and disgusting taste. Have you read "In Flight" by gabrielle's blessing? Or "demon King's hero"? And even better, have you read "from fake dreams"? That is a real story with people having realistic ambitions and reaction without having NTR, not this trash of a story. Seriously, the author should put ntr warning and not Shirou/Multi because
that will bring harem lovers and ntr haters like myself.

"This is a story with people who have reactions and do things that are grounded in realistic-ish motivations."

Dude, if so your definition of people with reaction and realistic motivation is by having the MC's girls fck other dudes, then you have weird and disgusting taste. Have you read "In Flight" by gabrielle's blessing? Or "demon King's hero"? And even better, have you read "from fake dreams"? That is a real story with people having realistic ambitions and reaction without having NTR, not this trash of a story. Seriously, the author should put ntr warning and not Shirou/Multi because that will bring harem lovers and ntr haters like myself.

Incest is not wincest bro. Loli's ain't W's either. I genuinely hope that shit ain't gonna happen.

Oh fuck.