|Reviews for ROCKY HORROR : ROXIE'S STORY|
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/3
I remember finishing this story on February 11th, 2013, when I discovered about The Rocky Horror Picture Show four days prior. I was afraid to leave a review of my suggestions and ideas for fear of changing your mind and ultimately changing the course of the story; I didn't want to change your original perspective. Everything's the same, Frank and Roxanne are still duetting Sweet Transvestite. I'm sorry I didn't write my review sooner, when I was welled up with emotions and fresh from reading the story chapter after chapter. I haven't read your story since February of 2013 and I don't plan on reading it again; I will love it as is, what I remember it as. I don't care if you update or not, Frank has a happy ending to me (how will Roxy handle Frank's death, since you're going by the events of the movie?). With much love, Tiffany
| RopedMeASparrow chapter 18 . 12/6/2013
I love this story but I'm so sad that it hasn't been updated in almost over a year. You said you wouldn't abandon this story but it seems as though you have. Hopefully you will want to update it at some point in the near future. I'd love to see the ending, especially with all of the changes you have made to the way Frank is and how he treats Roxie.
| Leachima chapter 18 . 10/31/2013
hey kayla. Im kinda new to TRHPS/frank fandom but I really like and appreciate ya story here! you deserve all the favs and follows :-) in the end ya story became very romantic and frank was portrayed in a more softer way. I think this is ok cause many fans (at least some here do) make frank look like a weird and heartless freak ;( which he is not! for ya next stories you could add some scenes of the bad and powerful frank (not a weirdo frank:-) but ya know what I mean,do you?!:-) I also like how you portrayed the other characters. roxie sounded like a really sweet girl (For my opinion shes too much lamp and not a strong woman) but thats how the story works and veryone has a different taste:-) especially the romantic scenes/bed scenes are very well written and understandable (even for me as a non-native english speaker). Im looking forward reading more fanfics by you,dont take too long:-) sorry for the long review but your long good story deserved care:)
| Ela chapter 18 . 10/30/2013
Having SUCH withdrawal symptoms, checking all the time for an update. Do include the songs if it helps with the story. Those who don't like reading the lyrics can skip them. We all know them by heart anyway, hehe. Either way, please continue.
| River-Spoilers chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
Love this story! Absolutely amazing and the song lyrics do work! I hope you continue!
| InnocentTraitor22 chapter 18 . 6/8/2013
this is quite possibly one if the most awesome storys on this site!
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/2/2013
Yesssss, I actually enjoyed the fact that they took counter parts to Franky's song. Though I don't think you should include her in all the songs, because that would over do it. Let her in when it's appropriate. Hm well, she knows damn well, that he is putting up this "act" of his former self, to ultimately, save them the torture of departure. I'm glad she understood it and you didn't make her go all pouty in the corner. One, that would be out of the character you set her as, unless for her own bemusement and teasing, and two, it would make me probably start to dislike her. Whenever I read a story with a character who I, myself, wish I could be with (in the real life) and a fanfic author puts in an O/C that's, ummm undeserving, or plain selfish, I get quite huffed up and stop reading it but, so far, I gladly picture these two together. (me wishing to be in her place, of course. Honestly who wouldn't, That sweeeet transvestite is just...) I like the way you portray him, and its interesting to think, his actions in the movie... to be slightly forced ones, hehe. Oh, I really like this, really truly. Please update soon.
| iluvville chapter 18 . 3/6/2013
I absolutely LOVE this series please please please please keep updating it! I thought it was good with the songs in it.
| vintage-music-romance chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I love how you describe every little detail about their romance, especially when they're making love ;) ITS PERFECTION! Can't will for Chapter 19 3
| Death the Grell chapter 18 . 1/19/2013
| Mrs. Mojo Risin' Blues chapter 18 . 1/17/2013
Hello :) Just wanted to say how much I simply ADORE this story. Rocky Horror is my second all time favorite musical/movie (The first being The Blues Brothers) and I think it's awesome to see that there are people who write very well written Rocky Horror fanfiction and do justice to the characters and the movie itself.
Also wanna point out that your OC is a believable and realistic character that really fits in the story as Frank's love interest. I would think Frank would be a bit of a complicated sort of character to type out, but you've managed to capture him perfectly though his speech and mannerisms.
Can't wait for more :)
- Mrs. Mojo Risin Blues
| Mev chapter 18 . 1/17/2013
It's still great! Keep going!
| mrsgoblinqueen97 chapter 17 . 1/2/2013
This is amazing. I have been sat here for 3 hours reading it. I couldn't stop! I hope it's a happy ending I just love Frank and Roxie together! I really like that you haven't changed Frank's personality entirely, he is still charming and confident and hasn't been turned entirely soppy like some people have done. Well Done! Hope to read the next chapter soon, I can't wait!
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/22/2012
| tanakaL chapter 17 . 12/20/2012
Eeee! Excellent once again. I have a question. Are you going to let frank die?