|Reviews for My Cute Little Kitty|
| Deep or Shallow chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
You definitely did alright. XD I love your author's notes at the end, made me laugh. Now, to the fic itself:
Some thoughts were disorganized, but not so badly that you couldn't replace a word with the one you meant or make it work in my head. :D In one instance you wrote and instead of a (if I remember correctly) and at the very end, Gunji started to drift off...? The next sentence adds meaning, but it still disturbs me.
The story and plot were rather dark, but great I think. I like when the author makes the audience feel like they matter in the story, for example asking them a (silly) question and other things.
Gosh, I hope you aren't angry with my words. Believe me, re-read this and just fix the mistakes and it's perfect. :) I enjoyed reading it, even though it may not have sounded like it. Cheers! :)
| dragonzice chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Mmm, that was lovely! Haha, it kinda looks like Akira has stockholm's syndrome.
| 99rain99 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
oh, I just LOVE this! Gunji is such a sadistic bastard, but i still love him THANKS FOR WRITING!