Reviews for Hidden Underneath
MysticSpeedForce chapter 25 . 4/7
I'm so glad your coughing went away :D There was actually a whooping cough outbreak at my school, so it was shut down about two weeks ago and we went into an early spring break(although it ends today...) Anyways, Yaaay, an update! It's been a pretty long time since your last one so this was a pleasant surprise :) As always I found zero grammatical mistakes and now I can't wait for the festival chapter to come! Update soon please :D
fan girl 666 chapter 25 . 4/6
awesome chapter
Jinxabelle chapter 4 . 2/15
I have to admit I adore the idea of Sasori being abusive towards Deidara. It's a take I've never really seen as mostly if I look for something involving both of them together it's shippy, and it really interests me. (Then again I tend to like things that constitute abuse towards my favourite characters, weirdly...) Aaaaanyway, I have to admit I adore what I've read of this so far. It's wonderfully written and well structured, and I adore the storyline so far.
Dreamin'Wanderlust chapter 24 . 1/29
Have I ever told you how much I love this story? I've been reading it since you first started and it rarely ever disappointed me. The story is smooth and the writing style is pleasant. Though I'm a little down at the death of Konan and Deidara's betrayal, it just makes it all the more thrilling. Tobi needs to chill, though. Like, I know he was a really sketchy character (which changed later in the manga), but what that heck? He's killing EVERYbody. I really am looking forward to what's next if you continue. Many thanks.
spook chapter 24 . 1/7
I'm in love with this! Keep writing please, omg. This is my favorite one so far️
MysticSpeedForce chapter 24 . 12/10/2014
Emergod! This was definitely an awesome chapter and I like your own version of the Konan and Obito/Madara's fight, it was cool and well written. I think the Deidara and Konan scene in the end was my favorite part of the chapter :) Keep up the awesome work and I hope your coughing thing goes away :( I know what that's like and it is in no way pleasant.
Lee Cheilyne chapter 24 . 12/6/2014
Hello!

Thank you for this chapter, i'll really enjoy this. i hope we'll have more dei/toby in the next chapter lol.

Anyways, take care, and I hope that you'll update soon!
fan girl 666 chapter 24 . 12/5/2014
awesome chapter I did not see Konan's death at all at the end
ladymomo1993 chapter 24 . 12/5/2014
Yay your back. Ummm... I'm not very good at reviewing so here I go. Your fics always make me want to read more but it's hard to get a good quality fic with Dei/Tobi. So just keep up the good work. Xxx one of your loyal readers that's never reviews.
Guest chapter 24 . 12/4/2014
Glad you are back. Yaaayy. I really love the story so far and sorry to hear that you were sick.
Avatarislife chapter 24 . 12/4/2014
Aww! I'm kinda sad Konan died. Thanks for updating! I haven't written a review before because isn't not my favorite thing to do, but after reading your authors note, I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story and I appreciate your updates! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
bruh chapter 23 . 10/11/2014
Plz update :"c
Guest chapter 23 . 9/25/2014
Omgg I love this story so much! I just found this story a few days ago and I already caught up to the latest chapter XD btw amazing fight! Can't wait for the next update :D
HetaYaoiFan chapter 23 . 9/14/2014
ewe I love this story soo much you must update soon! So excited for the next chapter! (((o(*゚゚*)o)))
Guest chapter 23 . 6/26/2014
Ohmagosh, this chapter was amazing! You wrote the battle scene so well and muhuhuhaha Hidan's gone:D...I absolutely loved it :D update soon please!
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