|Reviews for The Game's Vision|
| MrConcreteDonkey chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
This is awesome, u should upload more chapters!
| Rybalov chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
| Aries the Dog chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Ah it's good to read TouMAN in a scenario like SAO, which he clearly has the misfortune to be randomly dropped in. His IB side-effects should contrast nicely with Kirito's 'Internet gaming luck'. I guess his bad luck will effect him in game instead of constant near-death struggles. But the opening scenario is hilarious, 'Your brain will be destroyed by Microwaves' 'Fukou Daa!'
| Fangking2 chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
This is a nice idea, I want to see more. Howe3ver the length need to be much, much longer and plot more broad and detailed.
I have a suggestion for Touma's weapon. While he is a punching kind of guy, in SAO sword and weapons plays important role...How about a spear like Itsuke or a Nodachi like Kanzaki? If some thing more suitable, how about a monk spade or a steeled glove with armored blades reaching his elbows.
| JinzoMask656 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
haha interesting piece. please continue the work
| Kojiro Kun chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
WHoaaaa Interesting idea! i like it XD! can't wait to see how it goes and how u plan to blend the worlds together.
| ralf07 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Well... I dont know what to say beside good work.
Hope this story wont be abandone
| zer0light chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
pretty good for your first story, but there are some small problems. the starter gear for SAO is black clothes with a metal chest plate and no sword is provided, only enough coll to buy a sword from the store.
touma's battle abilities are pretty much limited to IB, punching and his "minds eye precog", which allows him to subconsciously process battle info and manuver his body so that IB is used in the most efficient way possible. it only reacts to supernatural attacks, but perhaps, you can make it so that while he's in SAO, he practices enough to make it work against non-supernatural attacks, ie. sword attacks, regular punches etc.
oh and 1 more thing before i forget, you better not ship asuna and touma, kiritoXasuna forever!