Reviews for This Moment
RoseQuartz1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
COOL! XD
lella7 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Very sweet :) I can completely imagine Hermione reading by torchlight at night. I also loved the panic at the owl flying in, followed by the scene freezing to a still image, and I thought you used the time prompt very well :)
Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Hermione is definitely the kind of child who would stay up reading with a torch under her covers. This whole fic fits with her character really well.
Lady Eleanor Boleyn chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
So cute! Little Hermione reading into the night...I could so picture that...and her scream when the Owl flew in was so vivid! Good job!
Inkfire chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
I liked the way you described this moment, it was so precisely engraved in her memory. I laughed picturing the owl and Hermione's panic, and her noticing the time was a very nice touch - though it was also needed for the challenge's purposes, obviously… Nice work!
obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
That is so Hermione like. XD I used to do that alllllll the time... Hehe time, pun not intended. Speaking of which, good use of time, cool number to pick. Great story! :D
smallpaperstars chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Good! concise but powerful :)