|Reviews for Looking for a happy ending|
| urshurak chapter 53 . 2/8
Very very nice one! It would have been even better with proper punctuation, spelling and syntax.
| urshurak chapter 22 . 2/7
Hi, I like your story very much but the faulty punctuation and the innumerable spelling errors make it hard to follow sometimes. No flame intended, just constructive criticism.
| BardicBird chapter 32 . 1/19
I've gushed in many, will continue to do so frankly. One more day and I'll be computerless for a week as I deal with my own things, so being able to drop into your world is proving to be a massive help. Your grasp of the characters grows with every single updated and chapter. You honestly have a better grasp on how to make them all dance then any other writer I've found so far - and frankly, you often have a better grip then the actual paid writers for the show in the last few seasons! Where they seem to sometimes lose their grip on set character lines, you are perfecting them. And I now need to go clean my keyboard, as the last line referencing the holding zone gals with large busts have at their disposal (which I know all too well) came out sideways at me, wasn't expecting it, and let's just say I'm going to stop drinking tea while I read your work. The giggle come at the best places - exactly where they are needed but NOT expected!
| Guest chapter 53 . 11/19/2013
great story I like your work
| maharetlynn chapter 53 . 5/27/2013
I just love this story! I have read it twice now and can't get enough. Please do more CM/NCIS crossovers. I LOVED it!
| mabelreid chapter 53 . 4/22/2013
The last line was the best. A new child always brings the sense of new beginnings. I was so happy to see everyone together and happy at this gathering.
I love Godfather and his "offerings" What a great cat!
Squirt is awesome too, taking care of Ducky. Aren't animals the best.
Thanks for a great story. I'm sorry it's over
| mabelreid chapter 52 . 4/22/2013
Very Nice... I love Tony at the end. Gibbs is right, they treated him no better than dirt and they've got what they deserve.
Thanks for making me laugh over GIbbs's mistake on his paper work. I really like their friendship and how they seem to have a father and son vibe that goes along with that friendship.
| Guest chapter 52 . 4/15/2013
Yay, so glad that you updated. loved it, more please.
| lilsis13 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
| PinkAngel17 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
Awww, such and sweet and wonderful ending! Definitely a happy ending like they deserve. :)
| BrownSuga32 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
I hated to see this story end. I loved it
| JENTWCSINYFAN2 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
Very nice and I like the happy ending indeed.
| silvermoon217 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
I found this story yesterday and spent the entire day reading it. I was sad to see it come to an end. It's already on my kindle to be read again! There are so many things about the story I enjoy - one of the best being the crossover between NCIS and Criminal Minds. Brilliantly done! Adding Godfather was perfect. It was an absolute hoot everytime he delivered a gift to someone. Thanks for such a great story. I'll be looking or more!
| DS2010 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
Loved the end. Though the addition of Eli, Mirriam , Mal and Ariel was cool.
Nice to have a happy ending ;)
| Kimd33 chapter 53 . 4/16/2013
I loved the ending and Pen finally got her girl.