Reviews for Forever and Forever Farewell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhh no you did NOT just do that! My heart! You are such a good author, thank you; for all your stories :) Love, TheLadyJuliette |
![]() ![]() ![]() no you didn't. |
![]() ![]() While I was reading The Fault In Our Stars for the first time, I equally feared and hoped that John Green would end the story just like An Imperial Affliction. He didn't. But you did. Wow. Just, wow. Cheers! :) |
![]() ![]() Did you just...you didn't just...oh...oh my. So good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love and hate you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fan fic. It's so close to the book, I can see this as a possible future for the book. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You managed to capture John Green's writing style soo well. |
![]() ![]() BWAAAAAAAAIHEBHIWBIJWKJNDJKNDGGGGHHH WHY NO WHYYYYYYYYY :( anyway, apart from shredding my heart into an emotionless void, this was really good. Hazels POV can be tough, but you pulled it off brilliantly. keep up the awesome work |
![]() ![]() This one sucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Your ending made me feel like throwing something, but I get it, and it's clever. I feel so bad for her parents |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD. THIS WAS JUST SO ASDFSFBOIDUBSFOIUFVOHSVFLIDVBIGVDSOBGPISDUBFPIUSDBFODISUGVBSVUBIUSD And you ended in the middle of a sentence. THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear God... YOU DID NOT. HOW. DARE. YOU! That's the best Hazel-death that I've read. Even though it was brutal. ESPECIALLY THAT ENDING, THANK YOU VERY MUCH. |
![]() ![]() NOOOOO WHAT NOOO OMG OMG NO OMG what arrggghhhhh :'( ' ' ' ' ' look at all the tears. look at them. goddamnit. uggghhhhhh. bwaaaaa why *cries* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was beautiful. I find that Hazel's POV is very difficult to capture, but you stayed perfectly in character. It was like I was actually reading a passage from the book. After I had read the first sentence, I was already intrigued. :) I believe that this is what happened to Hazel; John Green makes many textual clues throughout the end of the book that Hazel's health is worsening. Your descriptive language and interesting thought process really brought the story to life. I would also really appreciate it if you would take the time to read my Haugustus one-shot, Soothing Past Scars. Feedback would mean he world to me, as I am trying to improve my writing. :) Thank-you for sharing your work. |