Reviews for Forever and Forever Farewell
TheLadyJuliette chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
Ohhhhhh no you did NOT just do that!

My heart!

You are such a good author, thank you; for all your stories :)

Love, TheLadyJuliette
Ethereal Sphere chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
no you didn't.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
While I was reading The Fault In Our Stars for the first time, I equally feared and hoped that John Green would end the story just like An Imperial Affliction.
He didn't.
But you did.

Wow. Just, wow.

Cheers!
:)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
Did you just...you didn't just...oh...oh my. So good.
DetectiveInspectorSydney chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
Oh I love and hate you so much!
drood2099 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
I love this fan fic. It's so close to the book, I can see this as a possible future for the book.
chocolate chip homicide chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
Wow. You managed to capture John Green's writing style soo well.
Jemmi chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
BWAAAAAAAAIHEBHIWBIJWKJNDJKNDGGGGHHH WHY NO WHYYYYYYYYY

:(

anyway, apart from shredding my heart into an emotionless void, this was really good. Hazels POV can be tough, but you pulled it off brilliantly. keep up the awesome work
Logan chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
This one sucks
SaintClaire chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Beautiful. Your ending made me feel like throwing something, but I get it, and it's clever. I feel so bad for her parents
bluecupcakes chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
OH MY GOD.
THIS WAS JUST SO
ASDFSFBOIDUBSFOIUFVOHSVFLIDVBIGVDSOBGPISDUBFPIUSDBFODISUGVBSVUBIUSD
And you ended in the middle of a sentence.
THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
Juliet Knighly chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Oh dear God... YOU DID NOT.
HOW. DARE. YOU!
That's the best Hazel-death that I've read. Even though it was brutal. ESPECIALLY THAT ENDING, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
NOOOOO WHAT NOOO OMG OMG NO OMG what arrggghhhhh
:'( ' ' ' ' '
look at all the tears. look at them. goddamnit. uggghhhhhh. bwaaaaa why *cries*
BittersweetBirdsong chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Wow. That was beautiful.

I find that Hazel's POV is very difficult to capture, but you stayed perfectly in character. It was like I was actually reading a passage from the book. After I had read the first sentence, I was already intrigued. :) I believe that this is what happened to Hazel; John Green makes many textual clues throughout the end of the book that Hazel's health is worsening. Your descriptive language and interesting thought process really brought the story to life.

I would also really appreciate it if you would take the time to read my Haugustus one-shot, Soothing Past Scars. Feedback would mean he world to me, as I am trying to improve my writing. :)

Thank-you for sharing your work.
Emilise284 chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
WHAT NO OH MY WHAT HAVE YOU DONE MY BRAIN I CAN'T

Thank you
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