Reviews for Loco Buri
Guest chapter 25 . 5/1
This story is very solid. Would love to see an update.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/21
Please keep writing! This is so good!
tenchu11 chapter 25 . 9/13/2015
Interesting...following incase you update this. Quite a bit to follow but a good story. Kat comes off as tramping but then again isn't she :)
A Fanfic Newb chapter 25 . 6/15/2015
I'm new to this whole fanfic thing, so first I'd like to say that your story has definitly hooked me. I love the idea of it, expanding on a tiny hint left in the lord of LoL champs. You have the right amount of emotion, and the smutty scenes aren't to crazy, like, 50 shades of grey crazy, which I really like. The way you incorporated other champs throughout the story was sweet, like when that one guy was all like "yo this is my daughter fiora" I was like ooooooooh shit lol. Now for some constructive criticism. Some parts kinda got boring, I'd end up skipping half a chapter cuz there just wasn't anything going on, and other parts got confusion too, for some of the characters didn't really have an introduction, they just kinda appeared. I also wish you focused the story a bit more on kat and garen, they had that one big scene and that was it really, kinda a let down. But, overall, really good story, it totally got me hooked and even inspired me to try and write my own. I loved the romance, and you had the perfect ammount of smut, no XXX shit lol. Again, the way you included other champs was really sweet, and you gave all of them a personality, or a "human touch" (if that makes any sense) and that's something you don't get from just playing the game. I'll never see garen and kat the same way again. Excellent job!
Little Ceaser's chapter 25 . 3/11/2015

Nerding out aside, I love this thing and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
Adonna2424 chapter 17 . 2/1/2015
Ok, REALLY confused with chapter 17. WTF is lux doing?! this story sometimes really loses me, like the author just skipped writing parts or explaining things :/ can anyone fill me in?
Adonna2424 chapter 3 . 1/27/2015
Straight up, chapter 2 is fucking great. It's exactly how I would see Katarina as a child and her relationship to her father. Bravo! Cannot wait to read the rest!
Farahlee3 chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Oh man Ch 9 and 21. My favs. Makes me tingle everytime. So hot *o*
Hanatsuki-sama chapter 4 . 10/23/2014
That DOTA tho..the irony
alec.rowan.5 chapter 25 . 5/26/2014
Great story, please update though
Mach56 chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Still awesome, thanks so much for this work you have here.
waylsind chapter 25 . 1/22/2014
Oh man this story is so good! The conspiracies, the politics, the hot near death experience sex in a magical forest. To say I'm intrigued with your characters and this universe is an understatement. I really hope u don't abandon this story!
Only a wanderer chapter 25 . 1/18/2014
I like where this is going but there should be a little bit more of Garen/Katarina they are rarely together ;)
ShadowBlazer chapter 9 . 1/9/2014
This is an amazing story with great exposure into the characters' lives and emotions, their fears and uncertainty, which makes them all the more relatable to readers. I love that you've repurposed the lore for your story, and it works. Questioning the dichotomy of Demacia-good, Noxus-bad made this story all the more enjoyable for me, as I was quit sick of the blatant split in the joj archives myself. I'm not even fond of Garen, and I would still read through this to get to know yours better.

Thank you for taking the time to write this, and I look forward to reading more from you. Cheers.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/4/2014
The most engaging and story-rich league fanfic I have ever written, I love it and hope the story is continued!
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