Honey, you are a fantastic writer! You are. I absolutely love your writing in this. Makes me feel a lot of things..

it's times like this that i'm left wondering how twelve-year-old me raved about this fanfiction when it reeks of misogyny, and glorifies abuse and rape culture. you can't expect me to be okay with hermione forgiving the guy who physically harms her, labels her racist slurs, tells her she's worthless in the name of this so-called "love"? it's not love, it's abuse, plain and simple, and fanfiction like this only further perpetuates the harmful notion that if a guy treats you with excessive cruelty, he must be in love with you. that's not romantic, it's absolutely disgusting. the narrative horrendously butchers hermione's character, reducing her to someone who won't stand up for herself and allows others to step on her. that isn't hermione at all, and i'm saddened that i used to praise -even write-fanfiction like this, once upon a dream. the real hermione granger would completely demolish draco malfoy without breaking a sweat. in retrospect, i think i understand that fanfictions like this are the culmination of our societal ideals, of what we're taught to think is acceptable, of our internalized misogyny. well i've spoken and yeah, it's just that rereading the content that i used to enjoy has given me an eye-opening shock.

Very well-written! Didn't drag, but wasn't fast either. I approve of all the decisions you made when you wrote this. It was very clever, actually how you turned the story into what it is. You have every right to be proud of your work . That being said, there were numerous errors, spelling and otherwise. But hey, every great author needs an editor. Again, well done!

Awesome story!

I hate you right now

PERFECTION!

Wow, this is an absolutely mind-blowing story. I loved it!
It's officially one of my favourites :-)

I like where u r going with this. I completely see ur point

oh my! it is over?
what a beautiful - really beautiful story you have written. I LOVE every part of it. I really am speechless, at this moment I don't have the right words to tell you how much I liked it. I loved your characters specially blaise (I think I have fallen for him xxx lucky you luna) and the way the dramione slowly gets to know and love each other. for a moment I actually thought that there would be no happy ending and I am too relieved to find that I was wrong. it was such a unique story and I loved the way you right (being told by Blaise's perspective). oh gosh I really loved his character. this fanfic taught me never to give up hope , even in the hardest of times. this one will always remain a special one for me. (partly because I spent all my exam preparatory leaves to read this and partly because this story is so incredible ;)

about time pansy awoke from her daydreams...

whats going on?!

:)

will she gain her memories back?

nooo not blaise! its draco :(

i am curious about nott's character...he seems bad but maybe he is just like previous draco?