loved the fic thanks

More story, less theory. Dissertation of fictional theory is not captivating read IMO

wtf does gryfindor have to do with improving the world.

honestly slytherin would be better with their. ambitions or even hufflepuff

Wow, what a story! I enjoyed every moment of it. Thank you so very much! I will definitely look for all your stories.

There are several problems with the descriptions of the rituals. A wikiup is an Apache home, and would not be used at a multi-tribe gathering. It is illegal for anyone not registered with a recognized tribe to own anything made with an eagle feather. The fines and penalties are heavy. No tribal elder would gift an eagle feather to an outsider. Those are very, very minor nits in an otherwise very well written story. It would not have been mentioned except that your author’s note cited fictional works including the truly offensive and unrealistic Louis L’Amour works as your source. He and Zane Grey created much of the mistaken mythology of the American west, so beloved in Hollywood, and very, very far from fact.

Not 2000s 1990 I was there

I love this story

Please stop with the ridiculously long boring dissertations on theory. You have a good plot, no need to pad your story with such drivel. I'm thinking of just skipping to the last 3 chapters to avoid the long dull sludge.

So it's for detection, not a ward buster? If Voldie and his merry men, or really any hooligan got a device to break wards, security is compromised and thievery and worse mayhem ensues. Excellent story. Thanks

Like Firefox, Hermione is a search engine.

Are there chapters missing from this, we see a note asking for help and cut to them all sitting down reading the news, and in the next chapter they are censuring Nott for an attack that is never shown.

I appreciate the attempt to tie magic into science, but Dumbledore casually conjuring a chair doesn't really work with your earlier assertion of it requiring air. I'm not even sure if there's enough air in a room to transform it into furniture, but at the very least I'd expect it to create a large pressure differential which would result in a large amount of wind from air rushing to fill the now empty space. This definitely would've been noticed over the centuries.

I also find it weird you're advocating for no sex before marriage, but then also pushing 11-12 year olds into relationships. I think it'd have gone better if you'd just stuck with the friends and handholding for a while and left off kissing and romance for later in the story, especially if you're the sort that believes in no sex before marriage. Why not just go slow?

I was hoping for another house. We'll see how this go.

I don't know about anyone else, but the Kuahee sounds a whole lot like a crumple-horned snorkack.

This is why I’m always saying Harry and Hermione should’ve gotten together in canon (in response to the start of the chapter) if Hermione had become Lady Potter, the two of them would both have been HJP