the jar filling with potion was smart

and they are really cute

I love it

All right
I actually laughed with Hagrid saying things and not realizing what he said. great photo, lmao.
I love how you make changes and you're very smart. like the burning cabin, since there were no early years to deliver dragons to caregivers.

and these kids arguing about whether it's better to hide the object with them is really naive and strangely cute. make me smile

I love all the rest of the discussion, beautiful and sweet story. great writing

Harry's questions about the practical application of transfiguration are very interesting.

I love all the excitement and innovation, it was an interesting discussion

Hello! I must say that I love the changes you are making in the history of the canon.

as well as the emotion of both with the study and the techniques of concentration and sport.

if I found out it was magic, I too would be mad with curiosity about the possibilities.

little neville is cute, i'm glad they don't bow to intimidators and find support in each other.

it was very kind of Harry to remember Hermione's parents, since she doesn't have an owl.

and I even gave a soft laugh when Harry didn't mind holding hands, as he was developing skills with the left. it's sweet, cute and funny.

I'm glad that the dursleys aren't shit for harry. is different.

great story and writing, i already love it

Nice story. I like a smart Harry and Hermione. I think they became a couple too young, however.

They are way too young for a relationship.

I like this story so far. Hopefully it will not disappoint me later.

Very nice story. Thank You.

Writing this first comment at the chapter of Riddle Manor attack. Firstly, your story is good and certainly deserves more views. Now moving on,a gist of my comments/feedback.
Inheritance Ritual scene should have been written and shown. These kind of scenes are not only important but are also loved.
Harry Potter and him not being shown at least loving
Quidditch, not showing him as seeker is unthinkable. This is one of the basic character traits which shouldn't be changed in fan fictions or compromised!
Now to Riddle Manor attack scene. This may be your weekest written chapter. To think after so much training, especially that undertaken in Peru. You showed Harry reckless, not alert to surroundings and to every eventuality including of Magical signatures. Him fighting worse than a common powerful wizard, mindless of other fighters, attackers in picture. Mindless of paying heed to all threats, jumping like an amateur to save Hermione. When I remember correctly that his teacher at Peru had given him sword to be kept on his body all the time. Must say was the weakest, worst written chapter. Just to show Barty Crouch Jr. And Voldemort escape and to show Hermione destroying Horcrux of snake! Even Harry could have destroyed it and without getting bitten. Hermione is ok, but she is only a supporter in story, not the hero.

Great story

Estou adorando a história, maravilhosa. Muito bem escrita, apesar do tempo estar meio perdido, ocasionalmente. A inclusão de outras culturas é ótima, e o relacionamento entre as crianças dos anos mais baixos, os amigos e os professores do 'casal Potter' trouxeram bastante impacto para a mudança social. Parabéns.
Só uma coisa que me irrita é o fato do Harry sempre ser o mais poderoso, inteligente e alcançar tudo primeiro, a maneira como ele sempre é perfeito em relação aos outros me irrita, porque todos acabam por parecer menos. Sinto falta de um pouco do fogo da Hermione também.

I adore how Harry is helping bolster Hermione's confidence while dealing nicely with the lazy dorm mates.

They are really cute together!

"for society's benefit" Hufflepuff ya moron