Reviews for With You by My Side
Bloberon chapter 5 . 12/31/2019
no hay problema there is no problem
Veronica McClure chapter 55 . 12/16/2019
But the Beauxbatons carriage and the Durmstrang ship had accommodations for each one's dozen students. They weren't put up in Hogwarts.
Veronica McClure chapter 54 . 12/15/2019
"emptions"?
Veronica McClure chapter 54 . 12/15/2019
The two visiting schools were not "all girls" or "all boys" like the movie portrayed. Each school in the book was described as having brought a dozen students each, and later in the book, Harry was even approached by Durmstrang girl, still later it was revealed each school had with them six boys, six girls.
Veronica McClure chapter 52 . 12/14/2019
Why didn't he think of turning his water skis into a Windsurfer? He then would have had small masted sail with a crossbar handle to hold onto?
Veronica McClure chapter 51 . 12/13/2019
Your Professor Snape is starting to remind me of Mr. Spock. A nice change. Do you think you could ever write a story crossover where this type Professor Snape meets Mr. Spock?
Veronica McClure chapter 50 . 12/13/2019
You should use "circumstance" in place of "instance" .
Veronica McClure chapter 48 . 12/12/2019
I don't know, let's see... Antivenin?
Veronica McClure chapter 46 . 12/11/2019
So, NO one thought of putting impervious charms on the tents to make them impervious to fire or attack of any kind? Then everyone would have been safe staying in the tents.
Veronica McClure chapter 46 . 12/11/2019
Yeah I see a Mrs. Weasley type getting away with giving the Queen of England off the wall, effusive, strangle holds (err, hugs).
Veronica McClure chapter 45 . 12/11/2019
Your South American country is Chile, now? You this part of Harry'sHermione's learning vacation in Peru.
Veronica McClure chapter 43 . 12/10/2019
Another way to be different from canon, would be to have RemusDora find a stadium in the nonmagical world and ask the event coordinators if they rent the stadium out for big reunion they were in charge of and that they needed the big space for it.
Veronica McClure chapter 43 . 12/10/2019
Should be "Even with" considering the tense of what you wrote after.
Veronica McClure chapter 42 . 12/9/2019
Not only that but Lord Potter, whom you other girls don't even know, is also a "Bookworm" and both of them are Published Joint Authors 2x over soon to be three before they're even out of school. So there!
Veronica McClure chapter 39 . 12/5/2019
The only robes that were all one color were the Quidditch team robes of each House. All other school robes were merely trims. Really that last sentence should have been more like, "The sight of the two green trimmed students,..."
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