Thank you for sharing your creativity.

“Macnair has to go, but how?” Huh?!
Haven’t they been snatching DEs at will using the Dark Mark? Not grabbing him as soon as Harry recognized him as a threat is the biggest plot hole in this story, IMO. Either that or don’t make a point of Harry recognizing Macnair as a threat.

Why does no one ever bring bring up the negative population rate in the Wizarding world in these discussions? Even without wars, a society where couples typically have just one child is a dying society. Due childhood mortality, each couple needs to average about 2.5 live births just to maintain the population.

If Harry recognized the threat posed by McNair, why wasn't he the next DE snatched?

I am relieved that the incorrect usage of the word "incumbent" seems to have disappeared from this fic. It was rampant earlier in the story and it was driving me to distraction. I haven't noticed it in recently chapters and it is conspicuous by its absence.
Other than that vocabulary distraction that seems to be gone, I'm really enjoying this story.

They are seriously going to leave him in the castle with children around? They are useless...which was proven during the raid where nothing came of it but Harry’s injury. Why are they all acting so stupid now? For the most part this has been a great story but now they keep acting like fools.

So Harry just lets Molly treat Hermione like crap? She’s his betrothed. No wonder she still questions how he feels at times.

OMG! For being so smart, they are both being totally stupid holding onto the diadem. Give it to Minnie

lol tho i want more romance

and

i sort of want

it

to

be

a

mature

but good

none the less

cheese

Definitely a fantastic story, thanks for all the work you put into it

Another really great chapter,,

Another excellent and very enjoyable chapter

Another awesome chapter

Another excellent chapter

A rather funny chapter