Reviews for With You by My Side |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story! It was just fun reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The more of this story I read, the more sure I am that this version of Harry and Hermione should be in Slytherin; rather than either Gryffindor or the earlier suggested Ravenclaw. After all, their driving force seems to be ambition, which is what Slytherin truly stands for. This also has no effect on Harry being presented with Godric Gryffindor's sword. As his heir, it still makes sense that he would inevitably be presented with it. Their placement in Slytherin would also allow for a much more obvious and direct display of the changes they may be having on the world around them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "No more secrets." And yet, Harry doesn't tell Hermione about the diary, after they've hypothesized that the pain in his scar is a sign of Voldemort. Seems like a pretty big secret. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. My former roommate was working on her PhD in immunology & virology. Part of her thesis involved prions so I was actually able to follow the discussion. It was almost 20 years ago so my memory of it is a bit fuzzy, but it seems like a very logical explanation for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not really happy you decided to cripple his arm, especially when he could have just called for Fawkes. It’s not even basilisk venom, a phoenix’s tears would have cured him. He could easily call upon Fawkes to heal him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It should be Druidic magic, not Druidical. Otherwise great Fic thus far. |
![]() ![]() They want Harmony - Harmione - Harry/Hermione! That is beautiful! Love the reference to the Adventures of Tintin, by the way! |
![]() ![]() This love bullshit with Hermione is making this story hard to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() an excellent story I enjoyed it thoroughly thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did she get a laugh a little quick that I thought of. You are actually standing inside the lost city of gold Harry and Hermione were shocked. They could never imagine that the mythical city existed. "But, but,But,but,But,but,But,but,But,but,But,but,But,but,But,but,But," Hermione spluttered. Harry said I think you broke her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() warning warning biology alert this chapter is awesome but full of high-tech biology jargon sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just so you know Luna was nine years old when her mother died not 8 |